True beauty is found not in the exceptional but in the commonplace.
True beauty can be viewed in several ways. I agree to some extent that beauty can be found in the commonplace but I do not rebut that it can be found in the exceptional either. Beauty depends on the person viewing, what the person is looking out for and what the person gets to see at the end.
First of all, the assertion states that beauty is not found in the exceptional but when viewed in certain ways, it can be refuted. Beauty can be found in knowledge and this is made evident by geniuses. Geniuses in Arts like Leonardo da Vinci and geniuses in Science like Einstein and Isaac Newton exhibit beauty in a variety of ways. Consider the works of Leonardo da Vinci such as the Mona Lisa in museums that is seen in the Art world as a classic and a master piece. They are especially marvelled at how the painting shows life in the eye – it is an exhibition of the beauty of art. And not to talk of another work he did that is the painting of the Lord’s Supper in a Roman cathedral. Einstein and Isaac Newton are also geniuses that would forever be remembered for bringing out the beauty in Science; the invention of light bulb by Einstein and the formulation of theories of motion and relativity in Physics by Isaac Newton. Till date, people take inspiration from their work to bring out innovative ideas for projects. They exhibit the beauty of science.
Additionally, beauty can be found in the exceptional when things occur or are done out of the ordinary. Dubai is said to be the most beautiful manmade place because it is made to be extraordinary. Artificial islands, nice shopping centers, and sceneries are telling that beauty can be found in the exceptional. People in the Guinness book of record show the beauty of doing things out of the ordinary and having things out of the normal – in turn bring out the beauty in the exceptional.
However, beauty can also be found in the commonplace. The number one thing that shows beauty in the commonplace is nature. Plants, animals and natural sceneries bring out beauty. National Geography and Planet Earth are television documentaries that forecast unadulterated sceneries in the world. Ranging from the creatures and the life in the rainforest to that in the desert, it cannot be refuted that the commonplaces can bring out beauty. If rainforest and the desert seem far-fetched, observe the nature around you. Variety of plants and flowers, squirrels that hover around during summer to collect nuts and food, birds that fly in the skies are all demonstrations of beauty in its natural sense. The variety that it comes with makes it more pleasant.
Beauty in the commonplace can be seen in humans. The peculiarity of every individual including eye colour, body stature, complexion and height makes beauty diverse. Moving away from the appearance, beauty is seen in the behaviour of people and the way they interact. When a stranger shows a nice attitude toward you by smiling and speaking politely, the person shows another kind of beauty. In terms of behaviour also, the Native Americans are said to show beauty in the way they showed love by sharing whatever little they had and did things together. It is not surprising that their unity was their stronghold. When you see the way a mother cares for her child and the love she spreads over the child, it exhibits another form of beauty in a commonplace.
Also the intricacies of certain things we overlook can be classified as beauty in commonplace. Recently, an eyeglass that sees very minute things was invented incorporating the way microscopes work. It reveals the things the eye cannot see and it is marvelling how beautiful the detail of even the structure of a fly and that of a bee is. The detail of the embroidery on your sheet to the detail of a leaf are all evidences of beauty in the commonplace.
Beauty found in knowledge, in the extraordinary, in nature, in human behaviour and in the intricacies of things concludes that beauty is not just found in the exceptional, but can be found in the commonplace as well.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Consider using 'the surrounding nature'?
Suggestion: the surrounding nature
...nd the desert seem far-fetched, observe the nature around you. Variety of plants and flowers, squirre...
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Line 6, column 1, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
...other form of beauty in a commonplace. Also the intricacies of certain things we ov...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, look, so, well, as for, kind of, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 39.0 19.5258426966 200% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 12.4196629213 121% => OK
Conjunction : 29.0 14.8657303371 195% => OK
Relative clauses : 22.0 11.3162921348 194% => OK
Pronoun: 49.0 33.0505617978 148% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 111.0 58.6224719101 189% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 12.9106741573 70% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 3343.0 2235.4752809 150% => OK
No of words: 709.0 442.535393258 160% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.71509167842 5.05705443957 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 5.16014088096 4.55969084622 113% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69727821867 2.79657885939 96% => OK
Unique words: 297.0 215.323595506 138% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.418899858956 0.4932671777 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 1037.7 704.065955056 147% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 6.24550561798 128% => OK
Article: 9.0 4.99550561798 180% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.77640449438 169% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 36.0 20.2370786517 178% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 23.0359550562 82% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 46.4533816494 60.3974514979 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.8611111111 118.986275619 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6944444444 23.4991977007 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.36111111111 5.21951772744 45% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.97078651685 141% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 7.80617977528 26% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 30.0 10.2758426966 292% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.83258426966 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.345776774404 0.243740707755 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0923199119085 0.0831039109588 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0924211840476 0.0758088955206 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.193644017392 0.150359130593 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0580784437865 0.0667264976115 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 14.1392134831 75% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 48.8420337079 124% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 12.1743820225 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.1 12.1639044944 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.85 8.38706741573 94% => OK
difficult_words: 147.0 100.480337079 146% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.8971910112 63% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 11.2143820225 86% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.7820224719 85% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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