The true value of civilization is reflected in its artistic creations rather than in its scientific accomplishments.
Is true value of any civilization if reflected in its artistic creations rather than its scientific accomplishments, as the author maintains? The too extreme position of the contention misses the main point of civilization. I concede that we seldom associate artistic creation in holding impression about that civilization or nation both in archaic and present days. But any civilization takes a staunch stand on the basis of its scientific accomplishment. We cannot miss this point entirely.
First considering archaeological studies on ancient civilization we can extract the facts we distinguish that nation to others through its remarkable artistic creation, be it heliographic, or sculpture, or its utensils made of different elements like copper, aluminum etc. The artifacts extracted and believed to be a part of Mohenjora or Harappa civilization of Indian Sub-continent is considered as such. But still we cannot neglect the fact that even those civilization showed extensive use of science and technology pervasive in those era, be it in building a dam or in war with other nations.
The instance of India will help construe the importance of scientific achievement making the world understand the true value lies with this country. India is considered one of the country replete with artistic creation. It is medley of art coming from its different state, but this country did not want them to be considered in front of the world as a a civilization with beauty and aesthetics only. That is why right after the independence in 1947 it stared investing in science and technology and with the view to present itself as a powerful nation became self-reliant with nuclear power as one of the firs row countries. APZ Abdul Kalam is considered as the nation hero of that country for making their country stand as stringent civilization in face of any adversity.
Artistic creation is a very important parament in comprehending the civilization of a country. Every ancient civilization such as Rome, Greece, Babylon or the current civilization of aboriginal people of any country or nation like Italy, Turkey, France, UAE is differentiated based on its music, art, tradition and cultural value. But only knowing about their culture vitiate the understanding of that civilization. To perceive the true nature and the extent how the people of that culture can go, what was allowed, and how did that generation cope with the advancement with the world we need to know about their standpoint of scientific advancement.
In sum, it can be said that civilization depends on both its artistic creations and scientific accomplishments. This two distinct field supplement each other in building a civilization worth studying as a past and live in the present and to look up to for the future.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, look, so, still, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 19.5258426966 72% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 12.4196629213 56% => OK
Conjunction : 23.0 14.8657303371 155% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.3162921348 88% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 33.0505617978 124% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 66.0 58.6224719101 113% => OK
Nominalization: 34.0 12.9106741573 263% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2348.0 2235.4752809 105% => OK
No of words: 451.0 442.535393258 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.20620842572 5.05705443957 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.60833598836 4.55969084622 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.15942038333 2.79657885939 113% => OK
Unique words: 225.0 215.323595506 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.49889135255 0.4932671777 101% => OK
syllable_count: 733.5 704.065955056 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 7.0 1.77640449438 394% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.2370786517 94% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 23.0359550562 100% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.5277777607 60.3974514979 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.578947368 118.986275619 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.7368421053 23.4991977007 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.10526315789 5.21951772744 40% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 7.80617977528 64% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 10.2758426966 136% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.366929253569 0.243740707755 151% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.124180995644 0.0831039109588 149% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.166347544257 0.0758088955206 219% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.222737981839 0.150359130593 148% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.125640110688 0.0667264976115 188% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 14.1392134831 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 48.8420337079 99% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 12.1743820225 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.23 12.1639044944 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.45 8.38706741573 101% => OK
difficult_words: 105.0 100.480337079 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.8971910112 88% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 11.2143820225 100% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3 Out of 6
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