Undergraduate students majoring in Business or in the Sciences should not be required to take any courses in the Humanities since those courses won’t benefit their future careers.
The statement provided may have its pros and cons by itself, but I disagree with the statement.
I am of the belief that both business and science students should be required to take a certain number of courses in the humanities. the inclusion of such subjects will surely result in a well rounded graduate with a broader view of the world.
When people study only one field, sometimes their field of view may be narrowed and they may view the world either as black or white. However, this is not always the case. The world is a very complex place where a lot of things appear in the gray, where a lot of principles coincide and are not separated by the boundaries of courses or subjects which are created by humans and are imaginary.
Take the example of environmental studies. The subject must be taught to all science students and even business graduates who will become future business owners. It is critical that the graduates know their responsibilites towards the environment and also the consequences their actions may cause on the environment.
Moreover, courses like history each us not to repeat past mistakes that humanity has made. Geography teaches us the varied cultures, environments and wonders the world has for its people. Economy teaches us to manage money better and be financially stable. Philosophy teaches the art of thinking. Literature, music and art show us the creative potential the human mind posesses.
In conclusion, I believe that all graduate students must be required to take humanities courses to get a broader view of the world and not be narrowed down in their vision for a new world that they will inevitably end up building.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 133, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: The
...in number of courses in the humanities. the inclusion of such subjects will surely ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, may, moreover, so, well, as for, in conclusion, of course
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 19.5258426966 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 12.4196629213 81% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 14.8657303371 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.3162921348 88% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 33.0505617978 70% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 58.6224719101 55% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 6.0 12.9106741573 46% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1386.0 2235.4752809 62% => OK
No of words: 284.0 442.535393258 64% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.88028169014 5.05705443957 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10515524023 4.55969084622 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70444541358 2.79657885939 97% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 215.323595506 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.55985915493 0.4932671777 114% => OK
syllable_count: 432.0 704.065955056 61% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.38483146067 23% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.2370786517 74% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 23.0359550562 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 56.5280657923 60.3974514979 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.4 118.986275619 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.9333333333 23.4991977007 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.13333333333 5.21951772744 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 7.80617977528 13% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 10.2758426966 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.83258426966 145% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.259527776036 0.243740707755 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0771327853179 0.0831039109588 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0967874370066 0.0758088955206 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.128412316778 0.150359130593 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0834358997258 0.0667264976115 125% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 14.1392134831 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 48.8420337079 126% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 12.1743820225 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.02 12.1639044944 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.09 8.38706741573 96% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 100.480337079 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.8971910112 63% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 11.2143820225 82% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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