to understand the most important characteristic of a society one must study its major cities
The author states that to understand the characteristics of a society, one must know about its major cities.Its true that major cities of the society consist of people from different backgrounds which can offer us with the broad idea of that society but it won't truly give us the most important characteristics of the society hence i disagree with the assertion made by the author.
Major cities of any place have lots of people who do not belong to that society but have traveled to the area in search of job, property etc and hence, follow their own religious or cultural activities from their own society where they have traveled from and some may follow the traditions that belong to that society they live in.Which makes the major cities moreover a mixture of cultural and traditions which can not in whole give us any important characteristics of the society we want so it's not really the major cities but the rural areas that carry the main characteristics of a society.
The rural areas of any place comprises of cultural, tradition and religious aspects of a society where there main motto is to keep up their rich culture then other aspects of life which gets us more close to the characteristics of a society such as if a major city like New Delhi into account to understand the important characteristic of the society then we may not be able to collect any information which may be termed as useful because the city comprises of all different cultures and traditions on the other hand if we check a small town lt would give us a more concise amount of details that may help us understand the important characteristics of a society.
Therefore if we want to understand the important characteristics of a society one must learn about other small cities than only major cities because it may give u a very little amount of information that won't be enough to understand the main important characteristic of an society.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, if, may, moreover, really, so, then, therefore, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 19.5258426966 20% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 12.4196629213 81% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 14.8657303371 61% => OK
Relative clauses : 17.0 11.3162921348 150% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 33.0505617978 91% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 58.6224719101 82% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 12.9106741573 31% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1597.0 2235.4752809 71% => OK
No of words: 336.0 442.535393258 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.75297619048 5.05705443957 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28139028586 4.55969084622 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86440050437 2.79657885939 102% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 215.323595506 68% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.434523809524 0.4932671777 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 519.3 704.065955056 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 6.24550561798 16% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.38483146067 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 20.2370786517 20% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 84.0 23.0359550562 365% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 155.421000833 60.3974514979 257% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 399.25 118.986275619 336% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 84.0 23.4991977007 357% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 21.5 5.21951772744 412% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 7.80617977528 102% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 10.2758426966 29% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.83258426966 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.448632775197 0.243740707755 184% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.32450077261 0.0831039109588 390% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0997365387052 0.0758088955206 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.32450077261 0.150359130593 216% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0997365387052 0.0667264976115 149% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 42.9 14.1392134831 303% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -5.32 48.8420337079 -11% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.92365168539 164% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 34.9 12.1743820225 287% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 11.45 12.1639044944 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.73 8.38706741573 116% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 100.480337079 41% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 27.0 11.8971910112 227% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 35.6 11.2143820225 317% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 13.0 11.7820224719 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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