Every society is variegated and characterized by it's own individuality. While it is generally thought that one must have knowledge regarding major cities in order to understand the nuances of one's society, there are some who believe that it is not necessary to do so. However, I firmly support the former opinion and feel that it is essential to have an understanding of various major cities so as to realize the unique inherent qualities of our society.
Admittedly, there are several countries in the world, which are ethnically and traditionally diverse within themselves. To illustrate this, I would give cite an example of my birthplace, which is India. India is a diverse country with various ethnic and religious groups residing peacefully. It is a land of multifarious rich culture and traditions. It is impossible for one to to get an idea of our society unless we make an effort to understand the contributing factors, traditions being one of them.
Another point to consider is that a society is stratified in most of the countries. The classification could be based on economical or political basis as well. For instance, every county has both affluent population and middle class population. The differences in their lifestyle, economic conditions contribute enormously to the formation of a society.
Furthermore, there is opinion of people, which varies from a society to another. For example, if a particular society believes in egalitarian form of society, other might not believe or support the idea. Hence, the perspective of people regarding a situation varies widely from a city to another. The nuances of society might be attributed to this factor greatly.
Nevertheless, it might occur to a specific section of entire population that it is extraneous to study major cities to understand the society. This might be true if according to one, a society is one which he lives in and not the one existing in entire country or world. It might make sense, if one is way too egotistical to even consider the existence of various other societies and cities.
In conclusion, I feel studying major cities from various angle could prove to be significantly important in understanding our own society and others as well. Thus, it is worth spending some time to study the major cities.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, hence, however, if, nevertheless, regarding, so, thus, well, while, as to, for example, for instance, i feel, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 19.5258426966 118% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 12.4196629213 72% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 14.8657303371 81% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.3162921348 88% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 33.0505617978 91% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 58.6224719101 90% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 12.9106741573 70% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1931.0 2235.4752809 86% => OK
No of words: 379.0 442.535393258 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.09498680739 5.05705443957 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.41224685777 4.55969084622 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03859281166 2.79657885939 109% => OK
Unique words: 195.0 215.323595506 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.514511873351 0.4932671777 104% => OK
syllable_count: 636.3 704.065955056 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 6.24550561798 144% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.99550561798 100% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.2370786517 104% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 23.0359550562 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.1170115112 60.3974514979 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.9523809524 118.986275619 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0476190476 23.4991977007 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.71428571429 5.21951772744 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 7.80617977528 38% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 10.2758426966 68% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 12.0 4.83258426966 248% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.171072588602 0.243740707755 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0487860897998 0.0831039109588 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0348557922453 0.0758088955206 46% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0898223492436 0.150359130593 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0340168531576 0.0667264976115 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 14.1392134831 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 48.8420337079 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 12.1743820225 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.95 12.1639044944 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.82 8.38706741573 105% => OK
difficult_words: 103.0 100.480337079 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 11.8971910112 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 11.2143820225 82% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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