To understand the most important characteristics of a society, one must study its major cities.
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There are several approaches to understanding a society. A society can be quite simple on the look of it and more complicated when one does a deep analysis. I believe the most important characteristics of a society is easily observed in its smaller cities rather than the big ones. Though both kind of cities play a significant role in building a society, the small cities have its own essence and are more aesthetic. Let me elucidate this by giving some examples.
Firstly, the society is more about people and their opinions and mentality rather than about its buildings and infrastructure. And I think people in small cities are more closely related and know each other well as compared to the ones living in big cities. For example in India, I have been born and brought up in small city called Meerut. The people there live simple lives, they live in closely knit families, and are good to their neighbors. Since we know India is a land of love and traditional culture, we all celebrate our achievements, festivals together and all this can be seen very much in our small cities. later I moved to a big city or metropolitan city per se called Bangalore for working and here in big cities I observed that people are mainly running behind money and have become too self-centered due to which lot of social evils like disowning old parents, the cases of organised crime are on the rise, alcoholism and what not.
Secondly, In a diverse country like India, where every community has it different languages, traditions it can only be seen in small cities because in the big cities the culture is more cosmopolitan and doesn't give a clear picture of a society (here India).
Still yet some opponents may contend that the big cities provide a better picture because they are contributing towards development of the society and helping people live better life. But a society is much more than that, its not about the national highways, and glass buildings and roads. How people live with each other in harmony, mutual trust, desire to help each other takes a precedence over other things. There can be some orthodox practices like un-touchability, racism, as well, that prevails in a society which is equally signifant role to give a better understanding of a society and since in big cities generally people are modern and forward in their thinking we may not come across such instances.
Hence, I strongly assert that the small cities provide more understanding of the characteristics of a society and these characteristics may not always be the positive ones, there can be negative aspects to them as well and that's how a society is formed.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, hence, if, look, may, second, secondly, so, still, well, for example, i think, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 19.5258426966 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 12.4196629213 64% => OK
Conjunction : 25.0 14.8657303371 168% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.3162921348 80% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 33.0 33.0505617978 100% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 58.6224719101 89% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 12.9106741573 23% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2196.0 2235.4752809 98% => OK
No of words: 455.0 442.535393258 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.82637362637 5.05705443957 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.61852021839 4.55969084622 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74929155117 2.79657885939 98% => OK
Unique words: 226.0 215.323595506 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.496703296703 0.4932671777 101% => OK
syllable_count: 720.0 704.065955056 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 6.24550561798 112% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.99550561798 100% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.77640449438 225% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.2370786517 84% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 23.0359550562 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 80.7701681885 60.3974514979 134% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.176470588 118.986275619 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.7647058824 23.4991977007 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.29411764706 5.21951772744 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 7.80617977528 77% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 10.2758426966 107% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.83258426966 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0796524789374 0.243740707755 33% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0323082961802 0.0831039109588 39% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0284970656772 0.0758088955206 38% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0503209223138 0.150359130593 33% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0309866482287 0.0667264976115 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 14.1392134831 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 48.8420337079 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 12.1743820225 110% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.03 12.1639044944 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.19 8.38706741573 98% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 100.480337079 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.8971910112 71% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 11.2143820225 111% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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