To understand the most important characteristics of a society, one must study its major cities.Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In deve

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To understand the most important characteristics of a society, one must study its major cities.

Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.

In today's contemporary and fast paced world, undoubtedly the major and important cities will be determining the economic and political status of the country. Most of the international compay branches can be found mainly in the metropilitan cities of a country. But in order to understand the important characteristics of a society one must look at all the urban and rural places of a country and not just the major cities.

Firstly, it is completly evident that all the IT companies and infrasturcture are mainly located in the major cities. Consider the metropolitan cities of India like New Delhi the capital city of India, Bangalore etc has all the best facilities in the country. Not just India, consider Paris of France it has the greatest tourist attraction in its country. Beijing of China, its capital city is one of the beautiful plae in the country of China. But it cannot be generalised that these countries alone will be able to determine the cultures, traditions and important characteristis of their countries.

Consider India, if one wants to know the real traditions and cultures of India, they must surely visit the rural places and villages of the country. The villages are the remainder of the traditions people often forget to remember in the urban places of the country. Many of the almost forgotten important dates will be remembered by only these people and celebrated here. One can find actual peace here in contrast to the cities.

Although, if someone wants to determine solely the political or the economic status of the country there is no point concluding it by just looking at the villages or the rural places in the country. In this case, the rural places of a particular nation play a major role as most of the developments can be often found there.

Finally, in order to know what a country is and to determine the important characteristics of a society one must consider all the places and should not determine it by just looking at the major cities.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 43, Rule ID: DT_PRP[1]
Message: Possible typo. Did you mean 'the' or 'IT'?
Suggestion: the; IT
...rstly, it is completly evident that all the IT companies and infrasturcture are mainly...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, firstly, if, look, so, in contrast, in contrast to

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 19.5258426966 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 12.4196629213 89% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 14.8657303371 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 11.3162921348 18% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 33.0505617978 45% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 58.6224719101 82% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 12.9106741573 8% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1658.0 2235.4752809 74% => OK
No of words: 339.0 442.535393258 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.89085545723 5.05705443957 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29091512845 4.55969084622 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82462510333 2.79657885939 101% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 215.323595506 66% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.421828908555 0.4932671777 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 535.5 704.065955056 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 6.24550561798 48% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.2370786517 74% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 23.0359550562 96% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.751286717 60.3974514979 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.533333333 118.986275619 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.6 23.4991977007 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.73333333333 5.21951772744 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 7.80617977528 13% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 10.2758426966 97% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.107651678356 0.243740707755 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0438939039329 0.0831039109588 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0421000278902 0.0758088955206 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0742119771362 0.150359130593 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0378932932662 0.0667264976115 57% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 14.1392134831 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 48.8420337079 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 12.1743820225 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.38 12.1639044944 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.85 8.38706741573 94% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 100.480337079 67% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 11.8971910112 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 11.2143820225 96% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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