"A nation should require all its students to study the same national curriculum until they enter college rather than allow schools in different parts of the nation to determine which academic courses to offer."
Education is important for every individual and for a country's development. The real potential of a country is determined by it's intelligence and smart innovations rather than just its political background. By providing standard education to all the children of the country they will prosper in all aspects of their life. The argument whether a country should require all of its students to study under the same national curriculum until they enter college can surely be supported.
Firstly, when all the students study under a same national curriculum it becomes easy to determine where the student actually ranks. Consider an opposite scenario, a student from Andhra Pradesh and another student Madhya Pradesh of 2 different states in India have scored the same and are given equal preference in the admission process of a university. There is no guarantee that the difficulty levels of the two boards of the states are equal and giving the same importance to those students would be totally unfair.
Second, when all the students are from the same curriculum, it would be more easy to find the instrustors. Consider, when same subjects are being implemented in all the schools, from many years till now the instructors become more experienced and can work in any school throughout the nation. They will not have to worry if they had to transfer from one state to another and will still be able to continue teaching the students in their field of expertise. Also, the fee structure can be implemented similarly for both students and teachers all over the country which eliminates the atrocities of the private institutions.
Although, there might be a few difficulties involved in maintaing all the databases centrally of all the students and the staff and a few errors might be possible. However, these mistakes can be avoided by being more careful and it is not competly impossible.
In conclusion, as the advantages overweigh the disadvantages as the students will be treated impartially and the teachers can find it more easy, it is completly fair to agree that a nation should require all of its students to study under the same national curriculum.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ly of all the students and the staff and a few errors might be possible. However,...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, first, firstly, however, if, second, similarly, so, still, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 19.5258426966 102% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 12.4196629213 121% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 14.8657303371 81% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.3162921348 62% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 33.0505617978 57% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 58.6224719101 78% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 12.9106741573 54% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1812.0 2235.4752809 81% => OK
No of words: 357.0 442.535393258 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0756302521 5.05705443957 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34677393335 4.55969084622 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8337012767 2.79657885939 101% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 215.323595506 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.501400560224 0.4932671777 102% => OK
syllable_count: 570.6 704.065955056 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.2370786517 69% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 23.0359550562 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.8494145934 60.3974514979 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.428571429 118.986275619 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.5 23.4991977007 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.28571428571 5.21951772744 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 7.80617977528 13% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 10.2758426966 68% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.83258426966 83% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.310486107758 0.243740707755 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.117638316398 0.0831039109588 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.112122026801 0.0758088955206 148% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.189664006924 0.150359130593 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0939743139676 0.0667264976115 141% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 14.1392134831 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 48.8420337079 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 12.1743820225 107% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.48 12.1639044944 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.9 8.38706741573 106% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 100.480337079 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 11.8971910112 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 11.2143820225 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 83.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 6
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