To understand the most important characteristics of a society, one must study its major cities.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
Considering studying major cities to understand the critical characteristics of the society, I am strongly inclined to take the side of this statement regarding the numerous social factors that appear solely in the major cities. It goes without saying that the population can be considered as the definite factor to take into account a city as a major one. However, other factors such as the location, city antecedent, economic conditions, etc plays a minor role. Regarding the incidence of social problems and concerns that associated with a major city, it is highly unlikely that these issues occur in a minor city. To elaborate more on the topic mentioned, the following reasons and examples will be presented.
First and foremost, regarding the crucial characteristic in the study of a society, the psychological viewpoint can be indicated as a categorical factor to be concern by social science experts. The city population always will be accompanied by significant psychological issues particularly among the people interaction with each other. The major city provides excellent opportunity to investigate and decipher the psychological puzzles among the people in the variety of ages including teenager, youth, and adult people. In other words, in the major cities there are a massive cases that can be studied psychologically and prescribed them by effective solutions to improve the living conditions as an ultimate goal of social science study.
Another primary reason can be attributed to the security of crowded and major city. It is obvious in the minor city, the intensification of violent events is much less than a major city. As the annual crime reports reveal, the major cities more often than not can be considered as a through case for studying all violent events.
In addition, as the society study involves the related subjects that focus on the budget and economic factors, the major cities can provide a real case to observe the situation of economic reaction and interaction such as the volume of investment, employment conditions, and banks transaction. It is crystal cleat that there is a causal relationship between the volume of economic interactions on the one hand and the volume of city on the other hand. For instance, Beijing as the capital of China with the highest population city in the world, involves huge monetary daily that is conducive to high consideration compared with a minor city. Having regarded the explained example, the study of a major city is more connected with economic factors as the substantial part of social science study.
Aside from the point I made above, the major city involves the substantial problems that have noticeable impact on the environmental. As the society study should dramatically consider the influence of humans of their surrounding, the harmful impact of the major cities on the environment such as air pollution, destroying other living beings habitats and extraordinary exploitation of natural resources are much more than the minor cities.
It is also worth noting that some importance characteristics of a society such as the process of society formation, the orientation of some religious believes and the root of some ancient traditions drive from the historical evidences. Therefore, I cannot emphasize permanently that the major cities provide all the necessary elements of society study.
Taking all of these perspectives into account, I cannot agree more about the importance characteristics of the society that can be studied in the major cities regarding the psychological viewpoints, the huge volume of economic events, and noticeable impact on the environmental as the vital characters of a society. To my best knowledge, there are some substantial social factors such as the religious and ancient tradition that the major cities cannot be implied as the perfect case.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, regarding, so, therefore, for instance, in addition, such as, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 19.5258426966 108% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 12.4196629213 105% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 14.8657303371 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.3162921348 115% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 33.0505617978 85% => OK
Preposition: 80.0 58.6224719101 136% => OK
Nominalization: 29.0 12.9106741573 225% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 3266.0 2235.4752809 146% => OK
No of words: 615.0 442.535393258 139% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.31056910569 5.05705443957 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.97987886753 4.55969084622 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02983861024 2.79657885939 108% => OK
Unique words: 270.0 215.323595506 125% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.439024390244 0.4932671777 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 1065.6 704.065955056 151% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 6.24550561798 128% => OK
Article: 12.0 4.99550561798 240% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.77640449438 169% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.38483146067 205% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.2370786517 109% => OK
Sentence length: 27.0 23.0359550562 117% => OK
Sentence length SD: 65.8610012648 60.3974514979 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 148.454545455 118.986275619 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.9545454545 23.4991977007 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.72727272727 5.21951772744 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.97078651685 141% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 7.80617977528 51% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 10.2758426966 117% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 5.13820224719 117% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.83258426966 83% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.128730613663 0.243740707755 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0464024504079 0.0831039109588 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0374425468499 0.0758088955206 49% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0728086602005 0.150359130593 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0295792902749 0.0667264976115 44% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.6 14.1392134831 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.61 48.8420337079 73% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 12.1743820225 123% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.81 12.1639044944 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.42 8.38706741573 112% => OK
difficult_words: 173.0 100.480337079 172% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 11.8971910112 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 11.2143820225 114% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 11.7820224719 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum six paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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