Traditionally, every society composes of several smaller groups of people who live in major cities or in the countryside. In order to be familiar with the most characteristics of a society, some people prefer to study its major cities; while others prefer to pay more attention to rural areas. As this writer’s opinion, I agree with the former idea. In what follows, I will elaborate on my reasoning and examples.
To begin with, major cities are occupied by more people than rural areas. It goes without saying that the population is the most important factor in analyzing a society as a whole. For instance, Tehran, the capital city of Iran, occupies by a variety of people with different styles of living, religious, economy, and so on. these people share their idea, communicate with each other and live together as a whole. Therefore, a person can observe a major city and learn a lot about the whole society due to the variation and high population of the city.
To add, major cities have more positive or negative impacts on society. Consider a big city such as NewYork city which is the center of the arts and also it is the representation of the American’s culture and tradition. For instance, sculptures and constructions can tell us about the ancients and the history of the United States. In addition, big cities face some issues such as traffic or air pollution which can affect people or in a wide range, the environment. Also, big cities play crucial rules in political and economic events that are important characteristics of every society. All these factors bold the major cities among other parts of the society which a person can pay attention to them.
Finally, although big cities reveal most of the characteristics of a society rural areas can assist a researcher to find complementary information because rural areas are occupied by native people who keep their traditions and live in their ancient’s way with a little difference. Hence, they can represent historical information about a small group of society, not as the whole.
To put it briefly, as I mentioned above, one can infer that major cities can help a scholar who decides to be familiar with a new society, because not only major cities consist of a wide range of people from different part of the country but also big cities are the platform for important events and occurrences which affect the whole society.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, briefly, but, finally, hence, if, so, therefore, while, for instance, in addition, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 19.5258426966 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 12.4196629213 72% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 14.8657303371 114% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.3162921348 88% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 33.0505617978 61% => OK
Preposition: 59.0 58.6224719101 101% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 12.9106741573 116% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2017.0 2235.4752809 90% => OK
No of words: 409.0 442.535393258 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.9315403423 5.05705443957 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.49708221141 4.55969084622 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83588017913 2.79657885939 101% => OK
Unique words: 199.0 215.323595506 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.486552567237 0.4932671777 99% => OK
syllable_count: 663.3 704.065955056 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.10617977528 161% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.38483146067 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.2370786517 89% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 23.0359550562 96% => OK
Sentence length SD: 71.4608586639 60.3974514979 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.055555556 118.986275619 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.7222222222 23.4991977007 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.16666666667 5.21951772744 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 7.80617977528 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 10.2758426966 68% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.83258426966 186% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.154990083514 0.243740707755 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0549397284151 0.0831039109588 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0353208346618 0.0758088955206 47% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0991368716411 0.150359130593 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0364814600528 0.0667264976115 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 14.1392134831 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 48.8420337079 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 12.1743820225 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.61 12.1639044944 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.24 8.38706741573 98% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 100.480337079 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.8971910112 71% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 11.2143820225 96% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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