People do many different things to stay healthy. What do you do for good health? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Being one of the most proliferated well-known topic among all people, the health is implied as the crucial subject. As referred in the topic of the essay, people do many things to stay healthy. Considering my healthy habits, I am strongly inclined to do particular behaviors regularly including doing exercise continuously, preventing eating too much fast food, and check up my health characteristics in the appropriate periods. To elaborate more on the subject mentioned the following reasons and examples will be presented.
First and foremost, the critical role of doing regular, continuous and suitable exercise to stay healthy is undeniable. As the current medical science findings reveal, putting the sport into the daily schedule has impressive effect on the health. It goes without saying that the inseparable part of all doctors' prescriptions particularly whom come cross some deceases is exercise. The main advantages of the exercise can be attributed to losing additional fats, sugars as well as improvement of the heart rate. Moreover, the prevention effect of sports to dissipate the excess energy and inhibit harmful material accumulation are remarkable. Therefore, I categorically give credit to the positive role of exercise to stay healthy.
Another primary reason can be attributed to prevention of eating too much fast food. As I have heard numerously, there is a causal relationship between the heart attach on the one hand and the deteriorate influence of fast foods on the other hand. It is obvious that even if the fast foods are prepared using the healthy ingredients, the preparation process of fast foods is highly associated with short time. As a result, the harmful effect of crude materials in the foods would remain and the liver will be a place for storage of them. Besides, the saturated fats in the fast food has the significant impact on the heart attacks. So, the inhibition of eating this type of food will do immense enhancement on the people health.
Aside from the point I made above, all people should check their health characteristics regularly. It is important to be aware of any harm potential before the critical state. Needless to say that check up body medically plays a unquestionable role to modified the food diets.
Taking all of these perspectives into account, I absolutely put emphasis on the importance of doing exercise continuously, preventing eating too much fast food, and check up my health characteristics in the appropriate period for being healthy. Although, the current life cannot provide the all suitable conditions for eating the organic food as the healthy food instead of fast food and do more exercise, as far as I concerned, the prevention of bad habits and checking up health characteristics can compensate their missing.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, first, if, moreover, so, therefore, well, as a result, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.0286738351 36% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 43.0788530466 46% => OK
Preposition: 58.0 52.1666666667 111% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.0752688172 136% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2355.0 1977.66487455 119% => OK
No of words: 451.0 407.700716846 111% => OK
Chars per words: 5.22172949002 4.8611393121 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.60833598836 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00197819745 2.67179642975 112% => OK
Unique words: 234.0 212.727598566 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.518847006652 0.524837075471 99% => OK
syllable_count: 734.4 618.680645161 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 10.0 3.08781362007 324% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.2249984474 48.9658058833 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.142857143 100.406767564 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4761904762 20.6045352989 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.66666666667 5.45110844103 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.190642146227 0.236089414692 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0640207186892 0.076458572812 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0855456754569 0.0737576698707 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.115551892198 0.150856017488 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0774423070346 0.0645574589148 120% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 11.7677419355 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 58.1214874552 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.1575268817 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 10.9000537634 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.98 8.01818996416 112% => OK
difficult_words: 123.0 86.8835125448 142% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 10.002688172 115% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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