People do many different things to stay healthy. What do you do for good health? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Maintaining our health is a crucial factor to guarantee a long and happy life.There are many factors that one has to consider to maintain health. Generally speaking, I am of the opinion that keeping a healthy diet and being relaxed and stress free are two most important aspects of health, and such a belief is based on the reasons elaborated on below:
First I believe that keeping a healthy diet is very beneficial to our health. In today’s modern world, people have more tendencies to junk and fast foods, and they do not care whether their food is nutritious enough or not. Considering how tempting fast foods are, this eating habbit is becoming more popular particularly among the youner generations especially when they are away from family. One of the most dramatic effects of eating unhealthy food is obesity. By a way of example, I recall my cousin was a very fit and had an athletic body when he was living with his parents. However, when he moved out to a dorm to study at a university, his eating habits changed. He started gaining weight. At first it did not matter to him, since he was busy with his courses and could not see the impacts of eating junk foods on his body. After a while, although he was very young, The doctors diagnosed him with diabetes.
In addition to the importance of keeping a healthy diet, trying to have a relaxed and stress free mind is vital. It is commonly said that a healthy body is in a healthy mind. Serenity is a blessing, however it is very difficult to achieve in our turbulent environment. I recall my father was forced to an early retirement following a heart attack due to the pressures at work. He has eben in so much pain and unable to work ever since. My father’s experience is not an outlier, since I know many people who are under mental pressures because of their working environments, financial problems, family issues and so on . What I have learned from my father’s experience was that, no matter how tough life is, we have to care for our mentalities, since our health is directly connected to our mind.
In conclusion, and on the basis of the abovementioned agreements, I would like to reiterate that In order to stay healthy, we need to have a healthy diet, and we have to be relaxed.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, so, while, as for, as to, in addition, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 27.0 15.1003584229 179% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 46.0 43.0788530466 107% => OK
Preposition: 60.0 52.1666666667 115% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1864.0 1977.66487455 94% => OK
No of words: 404.0 407.700716846 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.61386138614 4.8611393121 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.48327461151 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70731930297 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Unique words: 219.0 212.727598566 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.542079207921 0.524837075471 103% => OK
syllable_count: 592.2 618.680645161 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 10.0 4.94265232975 202% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.1058993428 48.9658058833 123% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.555555556 100.406767564 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.4444444444 20.6045352989 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 5.45110844103 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.5376344086 126% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.079254474546 0.236089414692 34% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0194771186842 0.076458572812 25% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0298513206402 0.0737576698707 40% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0488727962842 0.150856017488 32% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0162661339333 0.0645574589148 25% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 11.7677419355 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 58.1214874552 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.75 10.9000537634 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.36 8.01818996416 104% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 86.8835125448 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 10.002688172 180% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 3.33333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 30
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