Q31: Some people spend their entire lives in one place. Others move a number of times throughout their lives, looking for a better job, house, community, or even climate. Which do you prefer: staying in one place or moving in search of another place? Use reasons and specific examples to support your opinion.
As the saying goes '' If you do not like where you are, move. You are not a tree.'' People in my community constantly complain about the hard conditions of their lives, however, they are too conservative to jeopardize their works' position and migrate to another place. Although moving to a new country or even a new city will challenge different aspects of one's life, it provides many opportunities which a person may not have if he/she stays in his/her hometown. I feel this because of two reasons: on the one hand by moving to a new and more developed country you have this opportunity to pursue your education in well-known and high ranked universities, on the other hand, you can be familiar with new people and new culture.
To begin with, most of diligent and hard-working students want to continue their education in graduated or post graduated level in a high rank university, and most of these universities are located in modern and developed countries such as United States, England and so on. Therefore students like me who live in Middle East countries try to fulfill our dream by applying to a well-reputed university in another country. To reach our goal we have to overcome some obstacles such as learning a new language, taking some exams such as GRE, TOEFL, SAT and more importantly try to get visa which is a complicated process. Hence, just very determined and resolute students are able to obtain their goals. By way of example, one of my friend applied for PhD in U.S five years ago and he got student's visa and moved to America, additionally, he learnt English At there more efficiently, and then he moved to Spain, because he studies in a high-ranked university in U.S and knew English like a native speaker he could find a very appropriate job related to his major in Madrid. He could not have his current position, if he had not moved to America.
Secondly, by migrating to a new community one has this opportunity to broaden his/her horizon and learn new things. As I asserted in the aforementioned paragraph, one requirement of moving to a new country is learning its language and culture and language are indispensable parts, in other words you cannot learn a language entirely if you do not have enough knowledge about its culture. Thus, new community equals knowing new language, new culture, new conventions and traditions and so on. It seems so exciting to learn through experience, books can teach us many things about other cultures, they can not give us good feelings which we gain by communicating with new people though. I remember last month I made my mind to take a trip to Russia so I started searching the most important places where tourists have to visit during their trip to this ancient country. I saw many pictures from Kremlin palaces and gained required information nevertheless, when I entered these palaces personally I felt the spirit of history at there that no book or any other printed sources could give you this feeling.
In conclusion, people just live once, so, they have to try to see new places in order to know new people and learn from them furthermore, they can continue their education in a well-developed country.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, hence, however, if, may, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, thus, well, i feel, in conclusion, such as, in other words, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 15.1003584229 60% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 24.0 13.8261648746 174% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 65.0 43.0788530466 151% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 78.0 52.1666666667 150% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2634.0 1977.66487455 133% => OK
No of words: 549.0 407.700716846 135% => OK
Chars per words: 4.79781420765 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.84053189512 4.48103885553 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79455710342 2.67179642975 105% => OK
Unique words: 284.0 212.727598566 134% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.517304189435 0.524837075471 99% => OK
syllable_count: 846.0 618.680645161 137% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.59856630824 135% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 30.0 20.1344086022 149% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 87.207005042 48.9658058833 178% => OK
Chars per sentence: 146.333333333 100.406767564 146% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.5 20.6045352989 148% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.1666666667 5.45110844103 187% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.216796750722 0.236089414692 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0707635687597 0.076458572812 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0455888360053 0.0737576698707 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.14326940609 0.150856017488 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0566609993182 0.0645574589148 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.4 11.7677419355 139% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.49 58.1214874552 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 10.1575268817 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.15 10.9000537634 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.46 8.01818996416 106% => OK
difficult_words: 116.0 86.8835125448 134% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.0537634409 139% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.247311828 137% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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