Groups or organizations are an important part of some people's lives. Why are groups or organizations important to people? Use specific reasons and examples to explain your answer.
Being one of the most proliferated known social sciences issue, the critical role of groups or organizations cannot be neglected. It is crystal clear that the initial stage to found a society is a group formation. As everyone probably knows, a society composes of different groups. Similarly, the organization composes of the a group or groups to do the assigned tasks. To elaborate more on the importance of groups or organizations as the main topic of the assay, the following reasons and examples will be presented.
First and foremost, regrading the limitation of the individual ability, the achievement of every particular tasks cannot be done individually. As previous excavated findings reveal, the tendency of humans for hunting in a group was more compared with hunting individually in variety zones of the world. It goes without saying that the probability to succeed, in a commonplace hunt, enhances remarkably. The variety of traces, different hunting tools and more interestingly, the paintings on the walls of some caves endorse this subject. Thus, in the prehistoric activities of humans, in addition to the requirement of more security for hunting, the enhancement of prosperous can be attributed as main reasons for the groups formation. It is crystal clear that the formation of groups in earlier life of humans was based on the providing of their essential requirements.
Regarding psychological viewpoint, different characteristics of the individuals particularly the thinking ability and considering the significant fact that different people think differently, persuade individual to aggregate different ideas for making much better decisions. Thus, the groups can be contributed as an assembly of the different ideas. This subject can be attributed as the another primary reason of the importance of groups and organization to people.
Taking all these perspectives into account, the importance of groups or organizations to people derives from the essential requirements of people life including the security, decision making, and achievement of high goals. To my best knowledge, a group or organization is small part of a whole society. If a group come cross a disturbance, the whole society may encounter some difficulties in the near future.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 323, Rule ID: DT_DT[1]
Message: Maybe you need to remove one determiner so that only 'the' or 'a' is left.
Suggestion: the; a
...Similarly, the organization composes of the a group or groups to do the assigned task...
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Line 3, column 718, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'groups'' or 'group's'?
Suggestion: groups'; group's
...n be attributed as main reasons for the groups formation. It is crystal clear that the...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, may, regarding, similarly, so, thus, as for, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.0286738351 36% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 43.0788530466 28% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 52.1666666667 98% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.0752688172 198% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1926.0 1977.66487455 97% => OK
No of words: 352.0 407.700716846 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.47159090909 4.8611393121 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33147354134 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.24764993705 2.67179642975 122% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 212.727598566 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.522727272727 0.524837075471 100% => OK
syllable_count: 608.4 618.680645161 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 13.0 3.08781362007 421% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.4661413507 48.9658058833 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.294117647 100.406767564 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7058823529 20.6045352989 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.23529411765 5.45110844103 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.305751862037 0.236089414692 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.101256506789 0.076458572812 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0875918263116 0.0737576698707 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.199219233521 0.150856017488 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0877433571191 0.0645574589148 136% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 11.7677419355 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 58.1214874552 74% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.10430107527 183% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.1575268817 121% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.45 10.9000537634 133% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.29 8.01818996416 116% => OK
difficult_words: 104.0 86.8835125448 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.002688172 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.247311828 146% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 81.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.5 Out of 30
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