Some people prefer to eat at food stands or restaurants. Other people prefer to prepare and eat food at home. Which do you prefer? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

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Some people prefer to eat at food stands or restaurants. Other people prefer to prepare and eat food at home. Which do you prefer? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

Considering the preference to eat at foods or to prepare and eat food at home, I strongly incline to take the side of preparing and eating the food at home. To elaborate more on the topic mentioned, the following reasons and examples will be presented.

First and foremost, the main advantage of the home made food is the usage of fresh materials. It is crystal clear that there is no permanent guarantee that restaurants' foods are always prepared using the fresh materials. For instance, in some restaurants, to gain more profit, the use of the old materials to reduce the produced cost of the food has been reported numerously. Being one of the most proliferated health issue, the critical role of fresh material to prevent or postpone some diseases such as cancer, aging, etc has been proved cardinally.

Another primary advantage of my preference can be attributed to the cost consideration of the home made food. It goes without saying, the healthy and high quality foods are usually prepared in expensive restaurants. It is not advisable to pay a top dollar for some foods that can be prepared at home with an appropriate cost.

Aside from the point I made above, because of some municipality problems particularly in huge cities, eating at home can be considered as more comfortable compared with eating at a food stand. It some situations, the high quality restaurants are placed at the crowded zones that in addition to long distance traveling, lingering in the traffic jam can be contributed as the main disadvantages. Besides, as the restaurant is considered as a public place, some particular conditions such as music, other customers or even restaurant interiors may be bothering. Needless to say, by eating home made food at home, more sense of relaxation for everyone can be provided.

Taking all these perspectives into account, the advantages of the preparing and eating the food at home outweigh the disadvantages of the eating at a food stand. Admittedly, factors such as health, appropriate cost, and more comfortable cannot permanently be provided at the restaurants. In my opinion, only for some special times such as birthday party, wedding anniversary, etc, eating at a food stand can be prevented the monotonous situation.

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Average: 7.3 (1 vote)
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, first, if, may, so, for instance, in addition, such as, in my opinion

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 15.1003584229 132% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.0286738351 36% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 43.0788530466 30% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 52.1666666667 96% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1888.0 1977.66487455 95% => OK
No of words: 372.0 407.700716846 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0752688172 4.8611393121 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.39173103935 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9710126904 2.67179642975 111% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 212.727598566 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.518817204301 0.524837075471 99% => OK
syllable_count: 609.3 618.680645161 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 7.0 3.08781362007 227% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.9217850356 48.9658058833 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.0 100.406767564 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.25 20.6045352989 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.1875 5.45110844103 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.391697029441 0.236089414692 166% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.144599727578 0.076458572812 189% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.115545409175 0.0737576698707 157% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.260866684292 0.150856017488 173% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.107714256552 0.0645574589148 167% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 11.7677419355 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 58.1214874552 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.1575268817 121% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.48 10.9000537634 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.98 8.01818996416 112% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 86.8835125448 114% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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