Some people prefer to eat at food stands or restaurants. Other people prefer to prepare and eat food at home. Which do you prefer? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answers.
These days, some people prefer eating at restaurants, while others think that eat at home is better. As far as I am concerned, I strongly agree that eating out because it is cheaper and spend less time than the other option. This essay will provide further aspects and more examples to support this notion in the subsequent paragraphs.
First and foremost, cooking takes many times. It is undeniable that cooking meal at home has to consider the time for shopping for food and cleaning the kitchen after it is cooked. Therefore, if I choose to eat at some casual restaurants, I will save my time from these parts. I can attest this from my own experience; When my family has a cooking dinner at home together, we will spend more an hour in a supermarket for buying food. Afterward, we cook and clean by ourselves. Consequently, eating out is more convenient and allows me to have more time for other things, such as studying or playing sport.
Secondly, eating out is surprisingly economical. People can spend a little cost at food stands or restaurants to paying for plenty of food with quality services. Moreover, some restaurants place near the universities, and they are comfortable for students. For instance, when I studied at the university, I usually ate at the small diner where near my university. This restaurant was quite cheap and decent for all citizens, and all dish’s prices were not more than sixty baths. Therefore, food stands and restaurants are not only convenient and tasty but also contribute me to save up the money.
In conclusion, I surely believe that eating out is the better choice. This is due to the fact that eating at restaurants is economical than cooking at home, and people can save time for shopping and cleaning by themselves.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, while, as to, for instance, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 34.0 43.0788530466 79% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 52.1666666667 67% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1475.0 1977.66487455 75% => OK
No of words: 304.0 407.700716846 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.85197368421 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17559525986 4.48103885553 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75556404819 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 212.727598566 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.542763157895 0.524837075471 103% => OK
syllable_count: 454.5 618.680645161 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.94265232975 20% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.6127962122 48.9658058833 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.7647058824 100.406767564 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8823529412 20.6045352989 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.58823529412 5.45110844103 139% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.300957213751 0.236089414692 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0980105349257 0.076458572812 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.107530409267 0.0737576698707 146% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.204938883703 0.150856017488 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0695395373481 0.0645574589148 108% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 11.7677419355 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 58.1214874552 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.55 10.9000537634 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.8 8.01818996416 97% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 86.8835125448 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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