Some people prefer to eat at food stands or restaurant. Other people prefer to prepare and eat food at home. Which do you prefer? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
There have been some moot points about whether it is better to eat food in restaurants or prepare and eat food at home. The question of this issue has aroused as a subject of controversy among people. When it comes to my position, by weighing up the pros and cons, I strongly subscribe to the point that I prefer to cook and eat foods at my home. I have some reasons, the most outstanding of which will be explicated in the ensuing paragraphs.
The first reason worth discussing here is that nowadays due to increases in raw materials, restaurants often use low quality and inorganic materials in their foods. Therefore, the quality of these kinds of foods is very lower than foods which I prepared myself. Moreover, Low-quality materials lead to some crucial disease for consumers. As a case to the point, I vividly remember when I was a student at the university, I ate my foods at restaurants and cafes, this issue gave rise to some problems for me. For instance, my hair became to fall dramatically which was very nettlesome for me. Thus I visited by my family doctor who suggests me to use organic and homemade foods because restaurant foods have harmful ingredients which thereat our health. My personal experience competently corroborates to the point that homemade foods are very beneficial for us.
By the same token, another paramount reason to be mentioned here is that today, due to raising taxes and wages, restaurants boost their foods cost hence, it is not costly for me to eat foods at the restaurant frequently. If I cook at home, I will save more money. My personal example demonstrates this reality, I have worked in a corporation which does not provide our meals. As a consequence, I should order my launch from a restaurant every day. This issue leads to I could not save my salary and expense whole of that. Thus, I decided to make my foods at home. This decision helped me to save half of my salary which was very helpful for me. My personal example shed some light to the point that preparing and eating at home is very lucrative for people.
Furthermore, fast foods and restaurant foods are very fatty and full of oil which is very detrimental to us but homemade foods are healthier.
To wrap it up, according to the aforementioned reasons, I reiterate that, I vehemently prefer to eat at home. Restaurants foods not only are very harmful to our bodies but also, are very expensive. As a result, I suggest to everyone to prepare and eat at home.
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Suggestion: Thus,
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, hence, if, moreover, so, therefore, thus, for instance, as a result, by the same token
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 15.1003584229 119% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 17.0 11.0286738351 154% => OK
Pronoun: 60.0 43.0788530466 139% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 56.0 52.1666666667 107% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2038.0 1977.66487455 103% => OK
No of words: 437.0 407.700716846 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.66361556064 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.57214883401 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73046331946 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 212.0 212.727598566 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.485125858124 0.524837075471 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 658.8 618.680645161 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 19.0 9.59856630824 198% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.8376281072 48.9658058833 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.6086956522 100.406767564 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0 20.6045352989 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.08695652174 5.45110844103 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 12.0 4.88709677419 246% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.305692896254 0.236089414692 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.104219454555 0.076458572812 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0862766413161 0.0737576698707 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.210185118071 0.150856017488 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0670241505621 0.0645574589148 104% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 11.7677419355 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 58.1214874552 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.75 10.9000537634 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.87 8.01818996416 98% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 86.8835125448 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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