Some people prefer to eat at food stands or restaurants. Other people prefer to prepare and eat food at home. Which do you prefer? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
There is a famous quote which says ( One cannot think well, love well, sleep well if one has not dined well). They use it as a metaphor that food is very important for the person to do well in their lives. But the food has to be very delicious, so a person can enjoy it. For me, I prefer to prepare and eat food at home and not eating at restaurants. As the home-made food is clean and trusted, I can control the amount of the ingredients used to make it.
Firstly, unlike restaurants, there is always a guarantee that home cooking food is clean. Especially, fruits and vegetables if they are not well washed, can cause vomiting and diarrhea. For example, about four days ago, I bought food for my family from a famous restaurant, and I think they hadn’t washed the vegetable well. Because, since that day, the family and I have suffered from vomiting, and when we went to the hospital they said that it’s food poisoning bacteria. So, if I prepared that meet at home I’m sure that nothing was going to happen to us.
Secondly, when preparing food at home, it’s easy to control the quantity of each ingredient used like spices. Some people like less salt, some like less garlic and so on. For instance, my dad has kidney problems, and he has to measure the amount of salt, protein, carbohydrates and even some fruits and vegetables. So, if we go to restaurants, and even though we ask for low salt meals, but still we don’t know the amount of the other ingredients used. That’s why restaurants are not a good choice for my dad, and we prefer preparing food for him at home.
In conclusion, homemade food is the best choice if I’m looking for clean and fresh ingredients, also if I want to make sure that I’m using the quantities that suit my wish.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, look, second, secondly, so, still, well, as to, even so, for example, for instance, i think, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 13.8261648746 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 43.0788530466 93% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 52.1666666667 58% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 8.0752688172 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1468.0 1977.66487455 74% => OK
No of words: 322.0 407.700716846 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.55900621118 4.8611393121 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23607819155 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55631567236 2.67179642975 96% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 212.727598566 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.527950310559 0.524837075471 101% => OK
syllable_count: 449.1 618.680645161 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 7.0 1.86738351254 375% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.7983898233 48.9658058833 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.75 100.406767564 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.125 20.6045352989 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.5625 5.45110844103 157% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.269619715769 0.236089414692 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.102607526236 0.076458572812 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.119053103758 0.0737576698707 161% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.154522792416 0.150856017488 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0830200812614 0.0645574589148 129% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 11.7677419355 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 58.1214874552 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.17 10.9000537634 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.37 8.01818996416 92% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 86.8835125448 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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