A company has announced that it wishes to build a large factory near your community. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this new influence on your community. Do you support or oppose the factory? Explain your position.
Considering the establishment of a large factory near my community, I strongly incline to take the side of the potent disadvantages of this issue compared with its temporal financial benefits. To elaborate more on the topic mentioned, the following reasons and examples will be presented.
Being one of the most proliferated known environmental issue, the construction of a factory can be attributed to the potential source of the industrial's pollution. As current scientific findings reveal, the operation of most factories are highly associated with remarkable changes in the surrounding area, particularly the ecosystem. There are lots of concerning reports that announced the significant threats for environmental characteristics such as portable water, air, wild animals' life eventuated in establishment of a factory.
In addition to the environmental concerns, as the factory needs the different experts to support its human source requirements, the unfavorable migration to the community will be formed. As a result, the essential elements of the community culture such as speaking, clothing, and traditional behaviors might be changed in a negative direction. For instance, only indigenous people have loyalty to their old traditions and cannot expect from other citizens to respect their traditional behavior. Although, some variations in the community culture cannot always be illustrated as a negative point, every community is usually recognized by their culture. It is also worth noting, the culture is a core characteristic of community that prevention from any negative change cannot be neglected.
Aside from the point I made above, as productions of a factory might transfer to different area. the capacity of the community's route should be appropriate. Any consistency between the community's routes can result many difficulties for community's population. Thus, some problems in the transportation system of the community can be contributed as an another disadvantage of a factory near the community.
Taking all these perspectives into account, I cannot disagree more about the company decision to build a factory near my community regarding the environmental concerns, the culture variations, and the transportation problems. Although, the factory can bring about some advantages such as economic benefit and employment, to my best knowledge, the long term disadvantages might outweigh the temporal advantages. Thus, it is more advisable to transfer factories to the far area from communities.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'industrials'' or 'industrial's'?
Suggestion: industrials'; industrial's
...tributed to the potential source of the industrials pollution. As current scientific findin...
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'animals'' or 'animal's'?
Suggestion: animals'; animal's
...stics such as portable water, air, wild animals life eventuated in establishment of a f...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: The
...ctory might transfer to different area. the capacity of the communitys route should...
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Message: One of these determiners is redundant in this context. Choose only one: 'a disadvantage' or 'another disadvantage'.
Suggestion: a disadvantage; another disadvantage
... of the community can be contributed as an another disadvantage of a factory near the community. T...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...antage of a factory near the community. Taking all these perspectives into accou...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ves into account, I cannot disagree more about the company decision to build a fa...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, regarding, so, thus, for instance, in addition, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 9.8082437276 143% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 13.8261648746 36% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 11.0286738351 18% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 43.0788530466 39% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 52.1666666667 100% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.0752688172 173% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2150.0 1977.66487455 109% => OK
No of words: 375.0 407.700716846 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.73333333333 4.8611393121 118% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40055868397 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.34748356564 2.67179642975 125% => OK
Unique words: 207.0 212.727598566 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.552 0.524837075471 105% => OK
syllable_count: 693.0 618.680645161 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.51630824373 119% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 10.0 3.08781362007 324% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.843441617 48.9658058833 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.470588235 100.406767564 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0588235294 20.6045352989 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.88235294118 5.45110844103 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 11.8709677419 42% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.85842293907 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.137327780613 0.236089414692 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0466803145362 0.076458572812 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0534247483776 0.0737576698707 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0897052083263 0.150856017488 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0447800214772 0.0645574589148 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.6 11.7677419355 141% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 32.22 58.1214874552 55% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 6.10430107527 213% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 10.1575268817 140% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.95 10.9000537634 146% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.95 8.01818996416 124% => OK
difficult_words: 124.0 86.8835125448 143% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 10.002688172 125% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 88.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 26.5 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.