To understand the most important characteristics of a society, one must study its major cities.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
Societies, ancient or modern, are a combination of multiple factors. Some of the major building blocks of societies are its people, places they live in, values they share, norms they stand by and culture they practice. Various historians try to gather information about these artifacts through years of research, study and analyze them to understand about how societies work and identify their key characteristics.
As mentioned in my introduction, I believe that studying about major cities can shed some light on to understanding the characteristics of a society. One example which is worth quoting here is the city of Bangkok. The king of the country is revered across the houses and shops in the city. They still carry out the commerce and other dealings in the local language and the traditions and festivals are celebrated with same vigor every year. The architectures of buildings and temples are inspired by their original folklore
There is however a major reason why it was possible in case of Bangkok. The country was ever attacked or conquered by an external country or kingdom. The original architecture was never plundered and withstood the test of time. There are many major cities in India which were plundered by many conquerors throughout the history, stripped them of their wealth, originality and drove the native away from their homes. This resulted in mass migrations of people from one city to another and lead to formation of a new blended culture that is not a true characteristic of any of the original societies.
These two examples basically explain that the researchers need to study the historical journey of the cities before they shortlist them as candidates to learn about the characteristics of a society.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...lture that is not a true characteristic of any of the original societies. These two ex...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, so, still
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 19.5258426966 72% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 12.4196629213 16% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 14.8657303371 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.3162921348 44% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 33.0505617978 70% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 58.6224719101 82% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 12.9106741573 31% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1466.0 2235.4752809 66% => OK
No of words: 285.0 442.535393258 64% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.14385964912 5.05705443957 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10876417139 4.55969084622 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91664437401 2.79657885939 104% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 215.323595506 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.589473684211 0.4932671777 120% => OK
syllable_count: 464.4 704.065955056 66% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.38483146067 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 20.2370786517 64% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 23.0359550562 91% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.7813505347 60.3974514979 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.769230769 118.986275619 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.9230769231 23.4991977007 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.69230769231 5.21951772744 32% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 7.80617977528 26% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 10.2758426966 68% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.83258426966 83% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.118732732049 0.243740707755 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0390358641309 0.0831039109588 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0368746635975 0.0758088955206 49% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0732735228581 0.150359130593 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0243695839411 0.0667264976115 37% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 14.1392134831 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 48.8420337079 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 12.1743820225 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.53 12.1639044944 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.72 8.38706741573 104% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 100.480337079 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.8971910112 97% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 11.2143820225 93% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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