To understand the most important characteristics of a society, one must study its major cities.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
The topic issue is whether for one to understand the most important characteristic of a society it is cardinal to study its major cities. For the purpose of this essay, we will consider that the meaning of the understanding should be seen from a historical point of view. While it is indubitable that the major cities must be thoroughly analysed<span class="hiddenSpellError" pre="be "></span> as they constitute the engine of the country economy, this unilateral approach ignores the small towns and the rural areas which are nevertheless a large part of the society.
For a deep and accurate image, the common features which define the society as a whole must be identified and only then one may say to what extent a big city can be seen as a summary of the society.
Nowadays, in the developed countries the major cities become as the Greek people use to say "megalopolis". Cosmopolitan and globalized with an intermingling of various groups of people brought up in different cultures, the megacities have now their own identity not always analogous with the country they belong. For instance, studying London, a scholar will see an incomplete picture of how the British people are or what are the values they cheris more. In fact, there are claims that London does no longer represents England as New York is a city of all people very different than the rest of America. nevertheless, these cities are the cultural core of society as nowhere else artsa and spirits can find a better place to extend. On top of this, the major cities are the financial backbone of the economy and also the home for the political power. In these metropolis, people are shaping their society changing almost every day due to social interactions. As a result, one can not look there for ancients roots and can be sure the traditional aspects of life are diluted.
having established above the importance of the major cities, let us turn now to the reasons for investigating small towns and rural areas. Firstly should be pointed out that in the villages in almost no globalization, emigrants rarely can be seen there and therefore the cultural tradition is well preserved. Another cardinal point here is the fact in the countryside people are generally formed by the environment and climate they live. this is why there are no much changes during time.
In conclusion, although the big cities are important, a real image must be made after every part of society have been deeply studied
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, look, may, nevertheless, so, then, therefore, well, while, for instance, in conclusion, in fact, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 28.0 19.5258426966 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 12.4196629213 105% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 14.8657303371 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.3162921348 53% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 33.0505617978 64% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 58.6224719101 72% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 12.9106741573 39% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2093.0 2235.4752809 94% => OK
No of words: 419.0 442.535393258 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.99522673031 5.05705443957 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.52432199235 4.55969084622 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.23953307366 2.79657885939 116% => OK
Unique words: 230.0 215.323595506 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.54892601432 0.4932671777 111% => OK
syllable_count: 679.5 704.065955056 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.99550561798 120% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.2370786517 84% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 23.0359550562 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.3574609784 60.3974514979 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.117647059 118.986275619 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.6470588235 23.4991977007 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.88235294118 5.21951772744 151% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 7.80617977528 115% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 10.2758426966 78% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.83258426966 124% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.149213418841 0.243740707755 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0489383187376 0.0831039109588 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0662867387559 0.0758088955206 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0882676908299 0.150359130593 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0504398731369 0.0667264976115 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 14.1392134831 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 48.8420337079 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 12.1743820225 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.02 12.1639044944 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.01 8.38706741573 107% => OK
difficult_words: 111.0 100.480337079 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 11.8971910112 126% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 11.2143820225 103% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 11.7820224719 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 83.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 6
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