To understand the most important characteristics of a society, one must study its major cities.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
A society is not a singular entity; rather a multidimensional, multi-layer function. In order to comprehend its most important
characteristics, it is important to take into account the characteristics exhibited by villages, towns in addition to the major cities.
Our societies differs from each other because of various factors such as: usage & procedures people follows, rules & regulation methods, mutual aid, grouping and division between people, restrictions as well as liberty enforced to people of the society.
In today's era, major cities societies are exhibit similar traits across world. people in these cities are well aware of the world and tries to imitate the similar popular standards which inhibits the author's purpose to study these cities for the characteristics of the society. By studying new delhi(india), one can understand the characteristics of mumbai(india). The most blatant example in this case is mumbai, india; which is considered as the economic hub of india with 2+ billion population in 80km of its radius. Now as per india's traditional culture; exogamy is not positively recognized however in mumbai; it is considered ok to marry someone outside of their tribe. often you will find such educated people who do not endorse any religious belief, but in small towns & villages; people follows completely opposite procedures regarding such matters; they tends to avoid exogamy as well as it is hard to locate atheist people.
also the food choices, cultural events people enjoys are different in major cities and small towns. people in major cities tends to eat packed food items whereas people in small towns make their own food consisting home grown items. small town societies tends to enjoy daily soap tv shows, cultural historical programs such as Ramayana(Hindu epic story) whereas people in major cities can be caught watching Netflix, prime & Youtube content which all are content wise international.
restrictions and liberty granted to societies are not similar in towns and major cities. A good case in this example are beijing, china compared with towns of the country. people in beijing often enjoy wide liberty because they are well connected to global forces and the society understand what kind of privileges should be given to people of its society however a town in Tibet which is also part of china will not enjoy the similar liberty. Let's take example of towns of kashmir, india when compared to new delhi, india. If any human rights violation happens in kashmir they do not have the same access to resources compared to people of delhi. people of delhi in such cases can dismantle the functioning of government however such voices in kashmir cannot even reach to their own counterparts. hence by studying only major cities; one cannot capture the important characteristics of society.
The grouping and natural division of people in society differs in small town when compared to cities. In small towns people refer to stay together most of the time and when division between people happens; it is most likely to happen because of conflict, Nonetheless, the division or grouping in major cities are natural and people tends to accept the privacy of Individuals. it is most likely that after marriage a couple moves out to different house and continue their life.
conclusively, it can be said that; to understand the characteristics of society one has to study all the major as well as small towns, villages as well because they all tends to differ with each other on some characteristics because of factors such as conflicts, restrictions & socio-economic environments. hence to have a comprehensive understanding we must gather information from all possible sources before arriving to any conclusion.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, however, if, may, nonetheless, regarding, so, well, whereas, as to, in addition, kind of, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 19.5258426966 108% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 12.4196629213 81% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 14.8657303371 81% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.3162921348 88% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 33.0505617978 79% => OK
Preposition: 94.0 58.6224719101 160% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 12.9106741573 54% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 3190.0 2235.4752809 143% => OK
No of words: 602.0 442.535393258 136% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.29900332226 5.05705443957 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.95335121839 4.55969084622 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89203113989 2.79657885939 103% => OK
Unique words: 285.0 215.323595506 132% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.47342192691 0.4932671777 96% => OK
syllable_count: 990.9 704.065955056 141% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 6.24550561798 112% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.99550561798 100% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.2370786517 119% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 23.0359550562 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 72.9817328743 60.3974514979 121% => OK
Chars per sentence: 132.916666667 118.986275619 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.0833333333 23.4991977007 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.29166666667 5.21951772744 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 8.0 4.97078651685 161% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 25.0 7.80617977528 320% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 10.2758426966 117% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 5.13820224719 97% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.83258426966 145% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.168855125007 0.243740707755 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0550979802018 0.0831039109588 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0556988331904 0.0758088955206 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0847288634965 0.150359130593 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.048049164342 0.0667264976115 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.1 14.1392134831 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 48.8420337079 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 12.1743820225 107% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.76 12.1639044944 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.68 8.38706741573 103% => OK
difficult_words: 145.0 100.480337079 144% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.8971910112 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 11.2143820225 107% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum six paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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