To understand the most important characteristics of a society, one must study its major cities.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
The topic claims major characteristics of a society can be inferred from studies conducted on its major cities. This opinion stands true. The big metropolises are the heart of any society. The inhabitants belong to diverse geographical and cultural backgrounds. And as they migrate into the urban centers, they bring with them practices and norm. Thus, within the circumference of a big city, one can find the true picture of the entire culture.
Consider one of the largest cities of the world, Karachi-the heart of Pakistan. Citizens composed of native of the four provinces and descendants of immigrants from locations which are now part of india.
A walk-through of the food streets of the city, one will find wide food range. From ‘Nehari’ (meat curry) brought in by people of Delhi to ‘Kausay’ (noodles and curry dish) belonging to Indian Gujraat. From ‘Sindhi Biryani’ (spiced rice) to ‘Pehswari Kharhai’ (meat curry cooked with species and vegetables).
Same is the case with the language. The people are frequent in Urdu, the national language, with slight traces of Punjabi, Sindhi and Pashto, the regional languages, in the accent. while the reflection of colonial rule still exists with wide acceptance of english as another official language. almost as restaurants will have menu is English. Common words such as ‘fan’, ‘pen’, ‘paper’ and ‘exam’ are understood even by those who never formally studied the language.
‘Sari’ (belonging to india), ‘Dothi Shalwar’ (from Punjab) and ‘Lengha’ (from Lucknow) are readily available in the market. these dresses have originated in different cultural center. Additionally, since locals have influenced by western dressing; jeans, T-shirts and skirts are available in almost all the markets of the city.
Norms and values are clearly reflected from acts of the people. As some people are comfortable with freely mixing of opposite gender, while others might have reservations, some school offer separates classes for male/female students. The public buses have segregated compartments. some people host wedding receptions with segregation, while others have single big ball room for all the guests. people generally regard joint families, while some have begun opting for smaller units. these are clearly visible in each neighborhood. As drinking is generally considered prohibited, alcoholic drinks are rare.
considering how different aspects of a society, be it food, language, clothing or values can be summarized from microscopic view of a major city, it is absolutely true that the major urban centers are indeed holders of the characteristics of the entire society .
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...he characteristics of the entire society .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, still, thus, while, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 19.5258426966 92% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 12.4196629213 48% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 14.8657303371 81% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 11.3162921348 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 33.0505617978 33% => OK
Preposition: 61.0 58.6224719101 104% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 12.9106741573 31% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2330.0 2235.4752809 104% => OK
No of words: 411.0 442.535393258 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.66909975669 5.05705443957 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.50256981431 4.55969084622 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.30457042464 2.79657885939 118% => OK
Unique words: 243.0 215.323595506 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.591240875912 0.4932671777 120% => OK
syllable_count: 718.2 704.065955056 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 8.0 4.99550561798 160% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 3.10617977528 225% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.38483146067 205% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 27.0 20.2370786517 133% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 23.0359550562 65% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 51.0896090037 60.3974514979 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.2962962963 118.986275619 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.2222222222 23.4991977007 65% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.2962962963 5.21951772744 25% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.97078651685 141% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 9.0 7.80617977528 115% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 10.2758426966 68% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 5.13820224719 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 20.0 4.83258426966 414% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0726780019683 0.243740707755 30% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0223421302281 0.0831039109588 27% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0298734588755 0.0758088955206 39% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0430303114471 0.150359130593 29% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0313402577441 0.0667264976115 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 14.1392134831 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 47.79 48.8420337079 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 12.1743820225 85% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.01 12.1639044944 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.76 8.38706741573 116% => OK
difficult_words: 140.0 100.480337079 139% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 11.8971910112 50% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.0 11.2143820225 71% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.7820224719 85% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum six paragraphs wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 16.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 6
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