To understand the most important characteristics of a society, one must study its major cities.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
The topic claims one can infer the major characteristics of a society by studying its metropolises. The big cities are the cultural heart of any society. The inhabitants are from diverse geographical and ethicity backgrounds. When they migrate to their new home, they bring along their practices and norm. Consider Karachi-the heart of Pakistan. it is most populous district of the country. Citizen comprised of natives of the four provinces and descendants of immigrants from different locations which are now part of India.
The food streets offer wide range of dishes. From meat curry recipe, introduced by people of delhi, to gujrati noodles and curry soup. From Sindhi spiced rice to Peshawar’s special bread are readily available.
The influence of British colonial rule still exists. English is considered second official langauge. Almost all restaurants have menu listed in English. Common words such as ‘fan’, ‘pen’, ‘paper’ and ‘exam’ are understood even by those who never studied the language formally. Older part of city is home for Victorian architecture.
Norms and values observed can be observed from the lifestyle. As vast majority of population has reservations on freely mixing of opposite genders, the public buses have segregated compartments for female and male passengers. Since alcohol is considered prohibited in Islamic Republic, wines and beers are rare commodity in the city.
Sub-Continent had been house to various religions. Inhabitants of Karachi are Muslim, Christians, Paris and Hindus. The city is has been many Mosques, Churches and Temples. Various festivals are celebrated throughout the year.
Different aspects of a society, be it food, language, clothing, religious-diversity or values, can be summarized from microscopic view of its major city. The major urban centers are indeed holders of the characteristics of the entire society.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...ity is home for Victorian architecture. Norms and values observed can be observe...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, second, so, still, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 19.5258426966 97% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 12.4196629213 24% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 14.8657303371 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 11.3162921348 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 9.0 33.0505617978 27% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 58.6224719101 68% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 12.9106741573 15% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1638.0 2235.4752809 73% => OK
No of words: 289.0 442.535393258 65% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.6678200692 5.05705443957 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12310562562 4.55969084622 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.30728518868 2.79657885939 118% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 215.323595506 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.667820069204 0.4932671777 135% => OK
syllable_count: 516.6 704.065955056 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.59117977528 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 6.24550561798 32% => OK
Article: 8.0 4.99550561798 160% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.2370786517 119% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 23.0359550562 52% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.9279058434 60.3974514979 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 68.25 118.986275619 57% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 12.0416666667 23.4991977007 51% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 1.25 5.21951772744 24% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 7.80617977528 38% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 10.2758426966 49% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 5.13820224719 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 19.0 4.83258426966 393% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0849873779241 0.243740707755 35% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.020935753109 0.0831039109588 25% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.035688594778 0.0758088955206 47% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.039649339329 0.150359130593 26% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0419567733618 0.0667264976115 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 14.1392134831 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 42.38 48.8420337079 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 12.1743820225 85% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.72 12.1639044944 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.62 8.38706741573 127% => OK
difficult_words: 117.0 100.480337079 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 11.8971910112 42% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.8 11.2143820225 61% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 16.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 6
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