To understand the most important characteristics of a society, one must study its major cities.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
The statement claims that to study characteristic of a society, one must focus on traits of its major cities. I absolutely agree with the opinion.
The population of a country is concentrated in its metropolises. The citizens of these regions are mainly emigrants from different parts of upcountry. since they belong to diverse ethnicity, when they shift, they bring along flavors for their practices and traditions along. Thus, their new home becomes host to their delict, dishes, dressing styles and religious beliefs.
The impact of sociopolitical reforms of the state can clearly be determined through close examination. The marks left by earlier governments and revolutionary movements can easily be observed by a round trip around the place. one can visit multiple museums housed within district boundaries to learn about the history. Some influence of past is still reflected in present.
The overall thinking and mentality of nationals are evident from what the occupations are valued by educated class. Again, these can be discerned from programs offered by educational institutes situated there.
We can consider the example of karachi. it is most populous area and heart of Pakistan. Its inhabitants are sindhi, Punjabi, Tajik, Afghan, Pashtuns, Persians, Gujarati, Urdu-Speakers and Baloch. The food streets serve Delhi meat curry, Peshawar bread and Lahore roasted chicken. The clothing Kts sell Pashtu caps, sindhi veil, India Sarees and Shalwar suits. The civilians are generally fluent in Urdu; however, traces of regional languages are easily be identified in varying accents. karachi is harbour to Mosques, Churches and Templates.
British colonial rule can still be felt. Older part of the city is house to Victorian Architecture. The locals give special preference to linguistic of former rulers. Sign boards, many newspaper publications and renowned academia have opted for English as their medium of communication. Western dresses are readily available in shops.
one can easily memorize the names of earlier nawab and Mir. various streets have been named after the former rulers. The city is the birthplace of it founder and his house has been declared as heritage site. You can travel to his time by visiting the place.
Over the passage of time, numerious medicine and engineering schools have srpung up as many Pakistanis still inclined to become doctors or engineers than reading arts.
The major cities represent a holistic view of several aspects of the society it tagged to. The overall lifestyle, religion, mindset and past of its people can be decipher by trends of urban centers.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, so, still, thus
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 19.5258426966 108% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 12.4196629213 81% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 14.8657303371 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 11.3162921348 18% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 33.0505617978 67% => OK
Preposition: 61.0 58.6224719101 104% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 12.9106741573 46% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2232.0 2235.4752809 100% => OK
No of words: 411.0 442.535393258 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.43065693431 5.05705443957 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.50256981431 4.55969084622 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75256583138 2.79657885939 98% => OK
Unique words: 271.0 215.323595506 126% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.659367396594 0.4932671777 134% => OK
syllable_count: 692.1 704.065955056 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 6.24550561798 128% => OK
Article: 13.0 4.99550561798 260% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 31.0 20.2370786517 153% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 23.0359550562 56% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.6701588158 60.3974514979 52% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 72.0 118.986275619 61% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.2580645161 23.4991977007 56% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 0.903225806452 5.21951772744 17% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 9.0 4.97078651685 181% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 7.0 7.80617977528 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 10.2758426966 68% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 5.13820224719 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 24.0 4.83258426966 497% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0973163621358 0.243740707755 40% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0232520028145 0.0831039109588 28% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0535653374708 0.0758088955206 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0502928798897 0.150359130593 33% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.088276297594 0.0667264976115 132% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 14.1392134831 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 49.82 48.8420337079 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 12.1743820225 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.33 12.1639044944 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.39 8.38706741573 124% => OK
difficult_words: 159.0 100.480337079 158% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 11.8971910112 55% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.2 11.2143820225 64% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum six paragraphs wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 16.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 6
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