Nations should suspend government funding for the arts when significant numbers of their citizens are hungry or unemployed.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the recommendation and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, describe specific circumstances in which adopting the recommendation would or would not be advantageous and explain how these examples shape your position.
The opinion states that government should withdraw funding from art and rather concentrate on eradication of unemployment and hunger. I disagree with the argument.
unemployment and hunger are two growing problems of the World. these menaces are rising at alarming rate. Every year many people starve to death due to financial crunch they face. The financial crunch are resultant of unemployment that has spread like an epidemic. To reduce or eliminate these problems, government requires to take measures to remediate the problems. The dilemma is if the government should suspend the funded allocated to arts and rather focus it on fight starvation and unemployment.
Often, the value of art is questioned by many. art includes painting, architectural and interior design, print making, communication design and performing arts such as plays and show. The field of arts is extensive and encompasses wide scope. Firstly, it is a form of expression which conveys emotions, social issues and other political history of the country. The art reflects culture and tradition of the country, thus it would not be wrong to consider it identity of the nation.
Secondly, the field of art jobs create varying levels and descriptions. The faculty member of university offering courses in arts and museum and gallery staff members are employed due to advance of the field.
Thirdly, The applied disciplines are contributing to development of other fields Print-making majors serve the textile industry, while architecture and interior designer provide service of their creativity to construction firm. design communication is enabling the marketing functions efficiency.
unemployment and hungry are major concerns of the societies, but diverting funding from art to improve the situation, rather it will act as catalyst in increasing these. thus government should not be discouraged to invest in this valuable field.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, thus, while, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 19.5258426966 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 12.4196629213 40% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 14.8657303371 121% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 11.3162921348 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 33.0505617978 42% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 58.6224719101 65% => OK
Nominalization: 19.0 12.9106741573 147% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1627.0 2235.4752809 73% => OK
No of words: 294.0 442.535393258 66% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.53401360544 5.05705443957 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14082457966 4.55969084622 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99157539547 2.79657885939 107% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 215.323595506 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.619047619048 0.4932671777 125% => OK
syllable_count: 496.8 704.065955056 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 6.24550561798 48% => OK
Article: 9.0 4.99550561798 180% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.38483146067 23% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.2370786517 94% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 23.0359550562 65% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 48.4260294925 60.3974514979 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.6315789474 118.986275619 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.4736842105 23.4991977007 66% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.36842105263 5.21951772744 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 7.80617977528 141% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 10.2758426966 78% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 5.13820224719 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.153148854467 0.243740707755 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0445250295943 0.0831039109588 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0425319886566 0.0758088955206 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0773400232608 0.150359130593 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0447388504339 0.0667264976115 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 14.1392134831 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 47.79 48.8420337079 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 12.1743820225 85% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.5 12.1639044944 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.75 8.38706741573 116% => OK
difficult_words: 100.0 100.480337079 100% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 11.8971910112 50% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.0 11.2143820225 71% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.7820224719 85% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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