To understand the most important characteristics of a society, one must study its major cities.
The statement claims that to study characteristic of a society, one must focus on traits of its major cities. I agree with the opinion.
The population is mainly concentrated in metropolises. Their citizens are mainly emigrants from different part of upcountry. since they belong to diverse ethnicity, when they shift, they bring along flavors for their practices and traditions along. Thus, their new home becomes host to variety of delict, dishes, dressing styles and religious beliefs.
The marks left by earlier governments and revolutionary movements can easily be observed there. one can visit multiple museums housed within district boundaries to learn about the history. Programs offered by educational institutes clearly show the valued subjects of the educated class.
We can consider the example of Karachi. it is most populous area and heart of Pakistan. Its inhabitants are Sindhi, Punjabi, Tajik, Afghan, Pashtuns, Persians, Gujarati, Urdu-Speakers and Baloch. The food streets serve Delhi meat curry, Peshawar bread and Lahore roasted chicken. The clothing markets sell Pashtun caps, Sindhi veil, India Sarees and Shalwar suits. The population is generally fluent in Urdu; however, traces of regional languages are easily be identified in varying accents. Karachi is host to many Mosques, Churches and Templates.
British colonial rule can still be felt. Older part of the city is house to Victorian Architecture. The locals give special preference to linguistic of former rulers. Sign boards, many newspaper publications and renowned academia have opted for English as their medium of communication. Western dresses are readily available in shops.
one can easily memorize the names of earlier nawab and Mir. Several streets have been named after the former rulers. The city is the birthplace of its founder and his dweling has been declared as heritage site. You can travel to his time by visiting the place.
various universities offer medicine and engineering. since most Pakistanis still prefer to be doctors or engineers rather than majoring arts.
The major cities represent a holistic view of various aspects of the society it belongs to. The overall lifestyle, religion, mindset and past of its people can be decipher by trends of urban centers.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, so, still, thus
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 19.5258426966 87% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 12.4196629213 64% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 14.8657303371 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 11.3162921348 18% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 33.0505617978 57% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 58.6224719101 78% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 12.9106741573 39% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1938.0 2235.4752809 87% => OK
No of words: 353.0 442.535393258 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.49008498584 5.05705443957 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33454660006 4.55969084622 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72925556863 2.79657885939 98% => OK
Unique words: 239.0 215.323595506 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.677053824363 0.4932671777 137% => OK
syllable_count: 596.7 704.065955056 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 6.24550561798 128% => OK
Article: 10.0 4.99550561798 200% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 29.0 20.2370786517 143% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 23.0359550562 52% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.783004925 60.3974514979 46% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 66.8275862069 118.986275619 56% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 12.1724137931 23.4991977007 52% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 0.965517241379 5.21951772744 18% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 8.0 4.97078651685 161% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 7.0 7.80617977528 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 10.2758426966 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 5.13820224719 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 23.0 4.83258426966 476% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.163661212213 0.243740707755 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.034557524464 0.0831039109588 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0989017751217 0.0758088955206 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0902118556083 0.150359130593 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.141941146802 0.0667264976115 213% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 14.1392134831 74% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 50.84 48.8420337079 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.2 12.1743820225 76% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.67 12.1639044944 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.63 8.38706741573 127% => OK
difficult_words: 143.0 100.480337079 142% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 11.8971910112 50% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.8 11.2143820225 61% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum six paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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