Men and women, because of their inherent physical differences, are not equally suited for many tasks.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim. In developing and supporting your position, be sure to address the most compelling reasons and/or examples that could be used to challenge your position.
The topic states that men and women are different physically and so they are not equally suited for many tasks. I disagree with opinion.
it is true that men and women have different features. these features might enable them to undertake certain activities. but the specific jobs are very limited. one such activity is lifting heavy weighted objects. men can easily pick luggage backs, furniture and so on. but this is one of the very limited tasked that fall in the category where a specific physical characteristic is needed.
most work required general physical attributes which are common in both population segments and most other required more of thinking skills, emotional quotient and intelligence. thus, for these activities can be performed well by anyone regardless of their gender and are mainly dependent on individual’s case.
A good public speaker is one who is able to spellbound his or her audience. The person is required to be able pursue listeners well and ensure the words are well-articulated. The only physical attributes are needed are ability to speak and voice modulation, none of which is gender-based. Similarly, the ability to driver motor cars well requires adequate practice to sharpen the skills, attentive mind and short response time. Now these qualities are not limited to man or woman.
many of the other important jobs require even more critical and creative thinking and lesser physical characteristics. these include treating patients, research and teaching. none of these are gender-suited roles. A lady doctor might be as competent as her male collogues, since it is dependent more on analytical skills and medical knowledge. Similar, a good Math teacher is one who is better at explaining at concepts and contributor in field of science is one who able to thinking rationally. these roles require where limited physical ability and more of IQ and EQ.
it is true that some of the jobs require very specific physical ability which is mainly found in one of the two genders. but the list is very limited. most of the tasks are accomplished by general physical characteristic, found is most people, and majorly other skills which are dependent on one’s mind. thus, these are not limited to male or female population.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, similarly, so, thus, well, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 32.0 19.5258426966 164% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 12.4196629213 32% => OK
Conjunction : 24.0 14.8657303371 161% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.3162921348 115% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 33.0505617978 67% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 58.6224719101 58% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 6.0 12.9106741573 46% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1932.0 2235.4752809 86% => OK
No of words: 370.0 442.535393258 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.22162162162 5.05705443957 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.38581623665 4.55969084622 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88576770077 2.79657885939 103% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 215.323595506 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.521621621622 0.4932671777 106% => OK
syllable_count: 627.3 704.065955056 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 6.24550561798 112% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.99550561798 140% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.77640449438 225% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 4.38483146067 23% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 20.2370786517 124% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 23.0359550562 61% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 43.6661150092 60.3974514979 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.28 118.986275619 65% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.8 23.4991977007 63% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.84 5.21951772744 35% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 22.0 7.80617977528 282% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 10.2758426966 165% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.83258426966 83% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.146362727982 0.243740707755 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0409156596812 0.0831039109588 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.05249314005 0.0758088955206 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.098983812604 0.150359130593 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0812422412572 0.0667264976115 122% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 14.1392134831 75% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 48.81 48.8420337079 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 12.1743820225 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.4 12.1639044944 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.21 8.38706741573 98% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 100.480337079 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 11.8971910112 42% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 11.2143820225 68% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.