Nations should suspend government funding for the arts when significant numbers of their citizens are hungry or unemployed.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the recommendation and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, describe specific circumstances in which adopting the recommendation would or would not be advantageous and explain how these examples shape your position.
Art and science are two pillars of the human’s intellectual evolutions since the history of mankind. From the Greeks to the Romans, the art is always a source of interest among the people, and kings and queens. The prompt suggests that government should not fund arts when the large proportions of country's population is hungry and unemployed. I mostly disagree with the prompt and will elaborate my position with three reasons.
The prompt suggests that if the government will not fund the arts, then the problems of poverty and unemployment will be solved more efficiently. However, in every country there is a big proportion of
the population working in the art sector, if the government stop the funding, then that would severely affect those which are employed in the art sector. For example, the movie industry is one of the
biggest industry in terms of the people it employed, if government suspends the funding to the art universities or institutions, it will severely affects the young students who want to join the movie
industry as an actor, director, or any other creative job. This also discourage people in joining these industries and thus, will create more problems than it is intended to solve.
The art industry is also responsible for major chunk of taxes that government makes, as these industries collect large revenues. If government cut the funding to arts then that inturn will affect the government itself. For example, movie industry, music industry, books, etc. are responsible for great revenues as these are the sources of entertainment for the masses. Thus, a considerable amount of money that these industries earns goes into the government treasure as taxes. If government do anything that harms the art industries, it will directly affect the government tax reserves.
In conclusion, there is no relation between the government suspending the funding for the arts and that helping in reducing the poverty and unemployment. Rather, doing so will affect the government more. Some might argue that arts does not help a country grow as science does, and thus government should focus on those areas which helps in the developing the nation and help people to get employment. However, the arts is responsible for developing the nation, though not directly but indirectly as it is responsible for propagating revolutionary ideas with paintings, novels, poetry, etc., and thus, is essential for the country's development. Thus in my opinion government should not cut the funding to arts.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: affect
...ities or institutions, it will severely affects the young students who want to join the...
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Suggestion:
...oung students who want to join the movie industry as an actor, director, or any o...
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Suggestion: Industry
... students who want to join the movie industry as an actor, director, or any other cre...
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...hese industries collect large revenues. If government cut the funding to arts then...
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Suggestion: Thus,
...essential for the countrys development. Thus in my opinion government should not cut...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, then, thus, for example, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 19.5258426966 77% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 12.4196629213 105% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 14.8657303371 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.3162921348 115% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 33.0505617978 76% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 58.6224719101 61% => OK
Nominalization: 26.0 12.9106741573 201% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2135.0 2235.4752809 96% => OK
No of words: 409.0 442.535393258 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.22004889976 5.05705443957 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.49708221141 4.55969084622 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83153653157 2.79657885939 101% => OK
Unique words: 197.0 215.323595506 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.481662591687 0.4932671777 98% => OK
syllable_count: 630.0 704.065955056 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 8.0 4.99550561798 160% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.10617977528 193% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.77640449438 225% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.2370786517 94% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 23.0359550562 91% => OK
Sentence length SD: 64.7359435111 60.3974514979 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.368421053 118.986275619 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5263157895 23.4991977007 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.26315789474 5.21951772744 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.97078651685 141% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 7.0 7.80617977528 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 10.2758426966 78% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 5.13820224719 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.239669738138 0.243740707755 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0812511930173 0.0831039109588 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0513837336006 0.0758088955206 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.110796402926 0.150359130593 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0698641294916 0.0667264976115 105% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 14.1392134831 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 48.8420337079 120% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 12.1743820225 85% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 12.1639044944 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.08 8.38706741573 96% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 100.480337079 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.8971910112 71% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 11.2143820225 93% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum six paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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