TO UNDERSTAND THE MOST IMPORTANT CHARACTERSTICS OF A SOCIETY, ONE MUST STUDY ITS MAJOR CITIES.
The statement claims that to study characteristic of a society, one must focus on traits of its major cities. I absolutely agree with the opinion.
The population of a country is concentrated in its metropolises. The citizens of these regions are mainly emigrants from different parts of upcountry. since they belong to diverse ethnicity, when they shift, they bring along flavors for their practices and traditions along. Thus, their new home becomes host to their delict, dishes, dressing styles and religious beliefs.
The impact of sociopolitical reforms of the state can clearly be determined through close examination. The marks left by earlier governments and revolutionary movements can easily be observed by a round trip around the place. one can visit multiple museums housed within district boundaries to learn about the history. Some influence of past is still reflected in present.
The overall thinking and mentality of nationals are evident from what the occupations are valued by educated class. Again, these can be discerned from programs offered by educational institutes situated there.
We can consider the example of Karachi. it is most populous area and heart of Pakistan. Its inhabitants are Sindhi, Punjabi, Tajik, Afghan, Pashtuns, Persians, Gujarati, Urdu-Speakers and Baloch. The food streets serve Delhi meat curry, Peshawar bread and Lahore roasted chicken. The clothing markets sell Pashtun caps, Sindhi veil, India Sarees and Shalwar suits. The civilians are generally fluent in Urdu; however, traces of regional languages are easily be identified in varying accents. Karachi is harbour to Mosques, Churches and Templates.
British colonial rule can still be felt. Older part of the city is house to Victorian Architecture. The locals give special preference to linguistic of former rulers. Sign boards, many newspaper publications and renowned academia have opted for English as their medium of communication. Western dresses are readily available in shops.
one can easily memorize the names of earlier nawab and Mir. various streets have been named after the former rulers. The city is the birthplace of it founder and his house has been declared as heritage site. You can travel to his time by visiting the place.
various universities offer medicine and engineering. since most Pakistanis still prefer to become doctors or engineers than majoring arts.
The major cities represent a holistic view of various aspects of the society it belongs to. The overall lifestyle, religion, mindset and past of its people can be decipher by trends of urban centers.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, so, still, thus
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 19.5258426966 108% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 12.4196629213 81% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 14.8657303371 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 11.3162921348 18% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 33.0505617978 67% => OK
Preposition: 59.0 58.6224719101 101% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 12.9106741573 46% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2210.0 2235.4752809 99% => OK
No of words: 404.0 442.535393258 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.4702970297 5.05705443957 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.48327461151 4.55969084622 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77462330009 2.79657885939 99% => OK
Unique words: 265.0 215.323595506 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.655940594059 0.4932671777 133% => OK
syllable_count: 685.8 704.065955056 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 6.24550561798 128% => OK
Article: 13.0 4.99550561798 260% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 32.0 20.2370786517 158% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 23.0359550562 52% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.7549967348 60.3974514979 46% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 69.0625 118.986275619 58% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 12.625 23.4991977007 54% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 0.875 5.21951772744 17% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 9.0 4.97078651685 181% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 8.0 7.80617977528 102% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 10.2758426966 68% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 5.13820224719 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 25.0 4.83258426966 517% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.134391750828 0.243740707755 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0291748877866 0.0831039109588 35% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0791880435689 0.0758088955206 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0690651957847 0.150359130593 46% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.107653834201 0.0667264976115 161% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 14.1392134831 75% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 50.84 48.8420337079 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.2 12.1743820225 76% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.56 12.1639044944 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.45 8.38706741573 125% => OK
difficult_words: 159.0 100.480337079 158% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 11.8971910112 55% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.8 11.2143820225 61% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 11.7820224719 59% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum six paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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