To understand the most important characteristics of a society, one must study its major cities.
To understand the livelihood of the people, to know about their lifetstyle, their mentality we have to study the whole society. For this purpose we have to analyse and dig deeper into the roots of the society and accumulate knowledge about their cultures, traditions, customs, etc. We need to study the characteristics of the society. Now considering the above assertion made I agree with the statement. In my opinion, in order to understand and know the characteristics of the society, we study its major cities. In the following paragraphs we further explore this claim and present credible support to bolster this assertion.
Main characteristics of a society can be determined by studying the major cities. Most of the influential people who have cardinal impact on the society mostly reside within the periphery of the major cities. such families or person, in some cases control the functioning of the society. Examples may comprise of prominent thus affluent business families that may be playing a important role in a society. So this factor may contribute in accumulating knowledge about the characteristics of the of the society.
These cities contain major businesses too. In other words these cities play a major role in the economical structure of the society. Heart of the economy lies in the major cities of the society. By studying this, we will be a getting substantial amount of information about the culture, traditions of the society and some other characteristics too. We may find some crucial information regarding major trends and customs of the society.
Every coin has two faces. By focusing on the major cities, we may be neglecting the darker sides of the society, that is the pauperism and not-so privileged part of the society. We may be missing on segment of the society that also has a pith role in the society but often rebuffed. this segment tells us about the deeper and subliminal characteristics such as mindset of the people who are privileged.
To sum up, I would like to state that yes, we may get satiable amount of information regarding the characteristics of the society from the studying its major cities. But we must not be completely depend upon this we must look and analyse the left out segments of the society, only then we may consider our research adept.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, may, regarding, so, then, thus, such as, in my opinion, in other words, in some cases, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 19.5258426966 41% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 12.4196629213 113% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 14.8657303371 81% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.3162921348 53% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 36.0 33.0505617978 109% => OK
Preposition: 66.0 58.6224719101 113% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 12.9106741573 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1936.0 2235.4752809 87% => OK
No of words: 386.0 442.535393258 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.01554404145 5.05705443957 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.43248042346 4.55969084622 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96514332791 2.79657885939 106% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 215.323595506 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.474093264249 0.4932671777 96% => OK
syllable_count: 621.0 704.065955056 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 6.24550561798 192% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.99550561798 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.38483146067 228% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.2370786517 109% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 23.0359550562 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.7352744614 60.3974514979 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.0 118.986275619 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5454545455 23.4991977007 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.31818181818 5.21951772744 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 7.80617977528 141% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 10.2758426966 78% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 4.83258426966 228% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.325596399387 0.243740707755 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.108526761895 0.0831039109588 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.104065560036 0.0758088955206 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.187321478346 0.150359130593 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0547413198039 0.0667264976115 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 14.1392134831 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 48.8420337079 111% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 12.1743820225 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.54 12.1639044944 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.96 8.38706741573 95% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 100.480337079 85% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.8971910112 71% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 11.2143820225 78% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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