To understand the most important characteristics of a society, one must study its major cities. Version 2.0
The statement linking the sense of a society positively with the crucial traits of its cities pays on the definitions what a society and a city are. Indeed, the briefest reflection on the explanations of a society – a large group of people who live together in organized way, making decisions about how to do things and sharing the work that needs to be done- and a city – a place where many people live, with many houses, stores, businesses, etc. – might have made anyone to release the same claim.
Apparently, to a certain extent the statement is true since there can be observed a considerable number of features in common between these two definitions. The assumption here is that any city producing knowledge of society is a society itself, a sample of the original society or so-named a society-city. Consequently, it containing a vast part of attributes of a society-country brings and has something own. Here, in any megapolis, city, town easily can be found its own history, the way of life, culture and traditions, religions and heritage. Should anyone happen to visit any city even only on a pair of days, it would be definitely a beneficial experience in understanding and absorbing not all but at least a noticeable amount of knowledge about its society. So, what about the whole, compelling view on a country?
Undoubtedly, the society of a whole county or even a group of similar countries is something more rather than characteristics of its major cities. Having taken into consideration the unprecedented development of cities over the world, the globalization and the evidence of growing intermingling, it can be explicitly concluded that the megacities which have been developing in the one common direction over the countries become similar to each other. So, unsurprisingly, there could be pointed out that a tremendous layer of innocent cultural aspects has been located beyond the cities. Being the main keepers of indigenous society with its traditions, religions, heritages and etc. the towns, villages deserved to be paid attention to. Inevitably a prominent question one might ask is whether the megapolises and cities do not reveal any information about and do not help in comprehending the other society’s attributes.
Actually, never in the recorded history of human beings has the diversification of cultures and, of course, the societies been developed as widely as it is today. Nowadays there have been highlighted the several levels of different societies not only on the territory of one country, but obviously in the frame of one city. Consider subcultures and sub societies have spread out over the cities, countries, the continents and the planet. Simultaneously there are the several global villages, developing in some common way and modifying in a huge one, over the world and the blizzard of differences, specific features, having remained in each specific society.
Indeed, having analyzed all facts mentioned above, the statement doesn’t seem to be completely rigorous. However, there is no need to build either a controversial claim or solid claim against it. Instead of it, just in order improve the picture alter the statement by considering the small cities, towns, villages and even more the remotest place of one took country.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 675, Rule ID: AND_ETC[1]
Message: Use simply 'etc.'.
Suggestion: etc.
...th its traditions, religions, heritages and etc. the towns, villages deserved to be paid...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, apparently, but, consequently, however, if, so, at least, of course
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 19.5258426966 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 12.4196629213 72% => OK
Conjunction : 22.0 14.8657303371 148% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.3162921348 62% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 33.0505617978 51% => OK
Preposition: 78.0 58.6224719101 133% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 12.9106741573 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2767.0 2235.4752809 124% => OK
No of words: 535.0 442.535393258 121% => OK
Chars per words: 5.17196261682 5.05705443957 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.80937282943 4.55969084622 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.07842579724 2.79657885939 110% => OK
Unique words: 289.0 215.323595506 134% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.540186915888 0.4932671777 110% => OK
syllable_count: 897.3 704.065955056 127% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 6.24550561798 48% => OK
Article: 11.0 4.99550561798 220% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.38483146067 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.2370786517 109% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 23.0359550562 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 66.8952554866 60.3974514979 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.772727273 118.986275619 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.3181818182 23.4991977007 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.5 5.21951772744 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 7.80617977528 13% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 10.2758426966 117% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.83258426966 166% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.122425095442 0.243740707755 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0367897119954 0.0831039109588 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0432556460701 0.0758088955206 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0709972813514 0.150359130593 47% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0332336958758 0.0667264976115 50% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 14.1392134831 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 48.8420337079 79% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 12.1743820225 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 12.1639044944 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.96 8.38706741573 107% => OK
difficult_words: 140.0 100.480337079 139% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.8971910112 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 11.2143820225 103% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.7820224719 119% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.