To understand the most important characteristics of a society, one must study its major cities.
This topic raises the controversial view that society can be studied by understanding its major cities, indisputably, country is recognize by its major cities. Nevertheless, ignoring the bucolic part of nation where tradition and rituals regarding the society are preserve, and considering the major parts seems controversial. Thus, I disagree with the opinion that to understand society as whole one must only consider the major parts and ignore the rural ones.
First of all, major cities are the place which majorly face the globalization, immigration, and exposure to today’s world, in that sense, considering the situation in major cities where most of the folks are not indigenous or parts which have exposure to trending fashions and cultures, is it feasible to understand the real cultural by understanding the major cities?, answer to this question is ‘No’, urban cities are the place where most the folks are immigrated to earn a bread or to get education in university, in that sense, considering the tradition in major cities seems unsound.
Secondly, rural part of a nation which have less exposure to the globalization and today’s world, it is most likely that they are less adulterated than the folks in urban areas and their originality of the cultural and rituals are well preserve in rural areas.
Thirdly, society, as whole is a combination of urban as well as rural area, considering the example of Paris a major city in France, commonly known as the “fashion hub of world”, considering the tradition of fashion in Paris doesn’t commensurate with the fashion in rural region of France. Similarly in Mumbai (economic hub of India), considering the staple food as fish and rich in Mumbai, it doesn’t commensurate with the staple food of India.
Conclusively, it is important to study major cities as they represent their nation but to understand the real tradition and cultural one must understand their bucolic part as they are less adulterated and less exposed to current world, which help to preserve their tradition and culture, which help to give an holistic view of a society.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, nevertheless, regarding, second, secondly, similarly, so, third, thirdly, thus, well, as well as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 19.5258426966 77% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 12.4196629213 24% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 14.8657303371 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.3162921348 115% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 33.0505617978 64% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 58.6224719101 87% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 12.9106741573 85% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1806.0 2235.4752809 81% => OK
No of words: 344.0 442.535393258 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.25 5.05705443957 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30665032142 4.55969084622 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.04727572301 2.79657885939 109% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 215.323595506 69% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.433139534884 0.4932671777 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 570.6 704.065955056 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.99550561798 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.38483146067 160% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 20.2370786517 40% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 43.0 23.0359550562 187% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 145.914733235 60.3974514979 242% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 225.75 118.986275619 190% => OK
Words per sentence: 43.0 23.4991977007 183% => OK
Discourse Markers: 15.25 5.21951772744 292% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 7.80617977528 77% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 10.2758426966 39% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.260251844938 0.243740707755 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.120057521625 0.0831039109588 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.105554815555 0.0758088955206 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.1384846786 0.150359130593 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0999499971404 0.0667264976115 150% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 24.8 14.1392134831 175% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 19.37 48.8420337079 40% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.92365168539 164% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 21.2 12.1743820225 174% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.06 12.1639044944 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.4 8.38706741573 112% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 100.480337079 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 11.8971910112 126% => OK
gunning_fog: 19.2 11.2143820225 171% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 11.7820224719 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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