Some people believe that corporations have a responsibility to promote the well-being of the
societies and environments in which they operate. Others believe that the only responsibility
of corporations, provided they operate within the law, is to make as much money as possible.
Corporations can be viewed as both beneficial and bad. This statement addresses
both views that many people have about corporations. Views come from personal
experiences and is the reason why some people like corporations and why some
people do not.
Half of this argument deals with people that like the idea of corporations. Some
people believe that corporations help stmiulate societies and promote the well being of
society. These people are ones that have never encountered a corupt corporation. Just
like in any other aspects of life, people can get images of something as being good if
they only brush the outside. It isn’t until they are being faced with a problem within a
particular corporation where they either work for them or have just dealt with them.
Also, people that are benefited from corporations are obviously going to like the idea
of an corporation.
The other side of this argument is that many people believe corporations are just
money hungry. This can be seen in many corporations throughout America. Many
small business owners will side with this argument. The problem lies that this is
corporate America and the little businesses are being taking over by larger corpora -
tions. As Mark Twain once said, “The vast amount of money is only in a couple of
hands”. This statement still lies true today. In addition, corporations are large and with
that being said they lead to more lines of coruption. In small buisnesses, the owners
can oversee their store entirely. Can these corporation owners really oversee every -
thing that is going on? Ask any employee at a corporate office if they believe their
workplace is being ran how they think the corporation would want it. One is likely to
find the answer that it is not.
Just like any other issue there are two sides to the story. The problem with this issue
is that most will agree that corporations are only there to make money. They don’t care
about the people that are helping them make money. They only care at the end of the
day how much money they made.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...ney. They only care at the end of the day how much money they made.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, really, so, still, well, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 27.0 19.6327345309 138% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 12.9520958084 62% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 11.1786427146 63% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 13.6137724551 103% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 28.8173652695 139% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 45.0 55.5748502994 81% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 16.3942115768 73% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1781.0 2260.96107784 79% => OK
No of words: 351.0 441.139720559 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.07407407407 5.12650576532 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32839392791 4.56307096286 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54206006084 2.78398813304 91% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 204.123752495 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.490028490028 0.468620217663 105% => OK
syllable_count: 542.7 705.55239521 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59920159681 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 4.96107784431 181% => OK
Article: 5.0 8.76447105788 57% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.70958083832 37% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.67365269461 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.22255489022 118% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 19.7664670659 121% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 22.8473053892 61% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.1561885941 57.8364921388 50% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 74.2083333333 119.503703932 62% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.625 23.324526521 63% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.91666666667 5.70786347227 34% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 25.0 5.15768463074 485% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 19.0 5.25449101796 362% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.20758483034 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 6.88822355289 87% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.67664670659 192% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.322781768886 0.218282227539 148% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0930008660954 0.0743258471296 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0740054654762 0.0701772020484 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0966418885573 0.128457276422 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0689049625373 0.0628817314937 110% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 14.3799401198 68% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 48.3550499002 136% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.1628742515 123% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 12.197005988 62% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.53 12.5979740519 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.85 8.32208582834 82% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 98.500998004 57% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 12.3882235529 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 11.1389221557 68% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.9071856287 67% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum six paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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