To understand the most important characteristics of a society, one must study its major cities
The author claims that one has to study the major cities of a country if they want to understand their culture, traditions or characteristics of that county. Many of us will argue that it will hold all the time while others will counter the claim by providing the examples. In my essay, I will highlight both the side of the statement and will provide sound reasoning for the same.
Major cities are the backbones of a country as these cities play a major role in every aspect of the country whether it is economy, producing employment or any other factors, they are the one which contributed the most. These cities represent the countries at the international level and in some case they even more famous then the country and many people consider them as the countries capitals, for example, many people including me think that Istanbul is the capital of turkey as it is very famous tourist destination and also remain in the news, but recently I came to know that Asthana is the actual capital of turkey. So, major cities have this much impact on the world. But, saying that one should visit major cities under the culture or characteristic of a country is quite contradictory because of the following reasons.
First, the major cities alone won't represent the country culture, because if talk about countries like India or China, which are not only huge in size but also constitute of different cultural tradition and language, for example, in India you will find different culture, tradition or language if go from one state to another state like in the state of Punjab you will find people wearing turban and speaks Punjabi but if go to Rajasthan you will people in their different traditional dress and speaks Rajasthani. So, by visiting the major cities one cannot get the essence of the actual culture.
Second, there are many other ancient cities or cities that are not so famous are way more important to visit to understand the characteristics than the major one because of the development and modernization of things they are losing the touch of their culture. One can get some idea of their culture from the major cities because of the presence of people from different corners or culture. But to get the actual feel and understanding one has to visit their ancient cities, for example, in India's city, Ayodha which is not among the top major cities is the birthplace of Hindu's Lord Ram, if you visit there you will find the actual traditional culture of India. So, major cities will provide a gloomy idea about the characteristics of any country.
In sum, we can say that the major cities are an essential part of any country, but they won't provide a clear picture of their characteristics. In order for better understanding, one has to visit the ancient cities and cities that have the essence of that county culture.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, second, so, then, while, as to, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 19.5258426966 77% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 12.4196629213 113% => OK
Conjunction : 22.0 14.8657303371 148% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.3162921348 115% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 33.0505617978 118% => OK
Preposition: 59.0 58.6224719101 101% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 12.9106741573 77% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2377.0 2235.4752809 106% => OK
No of words: 491.0 442.535393258 111% => OK
Chars per words: 4.84114052953 5.05705443957 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.70728369723 4.55969084622 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6101478928 2.79657885939 93% => OK
Unique words: 208.0 215.323595506 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.423625254582 0.4932671777 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 754.2 704.065955056 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.77640449438 169% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.38483146067 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.2370786517 74% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 32.0 23.0359550562 139% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 123.590542608 60.3974514979 205% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 158.466666667 118.986275619 133% => OK
Words per sentence: 32.7333333333 23.4991977007 139% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.33333333333 5.21951772744 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 7.80617977528 51% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 10.2758426966 49% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 5.13820224719 117% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.83258426966 83% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.270845371135 0.243740707755 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.126998338399 0.0831039109588 153% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0872874561257 0.0758088955206 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.16307655376 0.150359130593 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0580176741982 0.0667264976115 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.7 14.1392134831 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.46 48.8420337079 97% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 12.1743820225 120% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.38 12.1639044944 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.83 8.38706741573 93% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 100.480337079 81% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 11.8971910112 109% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.8 11.2143820225 132% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 11.7820224719 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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