To understand the most important characteristics of a society, one must study its major cities.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position
The statement provided, states that in order to understand the most important characteristics of a society, one must study its major cities. I completely agree with this statement because, major cities are home to many people. The human psychology therefore compels these individuals to build societies amongst like-minded people.
Large cities like Mumbai or Los Angeles have societies that pose an affinity for films and theatre. The defining trait of these societies is their inclination towards Bollywood and Hollywood. These cities are breeding grounds for upcoming artists. These major cities therefore help in defining the traits of the societies present here. The city of Mumbai is known as the city of dreams. Every upcoming actor who migrates to Mumbai has a dream of making it big in the field of acting. There are people in Mumbai who also have a predilection towards cricket. The city has produced some of the most promising talents in the field of cricket. A through study of the city of Mumbai will help a person narrow down on the important characteristics of various societies present here.
Moreover, cities like Chennai and Kolkata provide insights in the cultural heritage of various societies present in these cities. The aforementioned cities are some of the major cities in India. The city of Chennai is inhabited by the cultural sect known as Tamilians. The defining character of these people and the society is the language they speak in. The city of Kolkata is home to Bengalis. The peculiar nature of the societies here is their affinity towards sweets. The cultural characteristics of these societies are perceived when we study the major cities, they are present in.
On the contrary, it is not always that the major cities would provide researchers with the important characteristics of a society. Rural areas are often the source of these defining characteristics. It is often the case that people move from the rural areas to metropolitan areas of the cities. In doing so, these individuals do not leave behind the characteristics that define their society. Instead, they take it with them and then promulgate it amongst the like-minded people that the come across in the city. According to me, the true essence or the root of these societies lie in the motherland that they belong to.
I am still a strong advocate of the statement that in order to understand important characteristics of a society, one should study its major cities. But, if someone wishes to broaden their scope of research, it would be a good thought to take a look at the societies present in the rural area cause these are the ones that lay the seeds of foundation for societies to thrive in major cities of the world.
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... society is the language they speak in. The city of Kolkata is home to Bengalis. Th...
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...he city of Kolkata is home to Bengalis. The peculiar nature of the societies here i...
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... here is their affinity towards sweets. The cultural characteristics of these socie...
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...eople that the come across in the city. According to me, the true essence or the root of these ...
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...o thrive in major cities of the world.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, moreover, so, still, then, therefore, as to, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 19.5258426966 87% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 12.4196629213 40% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 14.8657303371 47% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.3162921348 106% => OK
Pronoun: 42.0 33.0505617978 127% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 72.0 58.6224719101 123% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 12.9106741573 54% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2295.0 2235.4752809 103% => OK
No of words: 457.0 442.535393258 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.02188183807 5.05705443957 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.62358717085 4.55969084622 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80562541675 2.79657885939 100% => OK
Unique words: 195.0 215.323595506 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.426695842451 0.4932671777 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 728.1 704.065955056 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 6.24550561798 160% => OK
Article: 13.0 4.99550561798 260% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 27.0 20.2370786517 133% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 23.0359550562 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.9783977351 60.3974514979 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.0 118.986275619 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.9259259259 23.4991977007 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.0 5.21951772744 57% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 7.80617977528 115% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 10.2758426966 146% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 5.13820224719 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 12.0 4.83258426966 248% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.221727330071 0.243740707755 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0693812593811 0.0831039109588 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0636463506626 0.0758088955206 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.153143213248 0.150359130593 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0613820383043 0.0667264976115 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 14.1392134831 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 48.8420337079 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 12.1743820225 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.54 12.1639044944 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.13 8.38706741573 85% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 100.480337079 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 11.8971910112 59% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.4 11.2143820225 75% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.7820224719 85% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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