To understand the most important characteristics of a society, one must study its major cities.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
Is it possible to say major cities have the important characteristics of a society? What about small cities? Don’t small cities also have characteristics to be studied in oder to understand a society? Well, both small and major cities are to be studied when it comes to understanding the important characteristics of a society.
Moreover, saying only major cities are to be studied when it comes to understanding the most important characteristics of a society simply derides minor cities’ contribution to the society. All characteristics of both cities are important to understand a society. No quality should be considered ‘most important’ or ‘less important. However, talking about characteristics, what type of characteristic are we talking about? Speaking about diversity, art and physical access to facilities of higher learning, major cities should be studied. Major cities consist of different people from different tribes, races and ethnic groups. In order to understand a society based on cultural diversity, major city must be studied. Minor cities only comprise of people with little to no exposure of other ethnic group because of their homogeneous environment.
Also, talking about art, symphonies, galleries, cinemas, and other art exhibitions are found in big cities. Small cities have little access to art in form of high school bands, internet to access arts only, amongst other. Thus, major cities should be studied when it comes to understanding a society’s art life.
Furthermore, when it comes to studying accessibility of higher institutions, major cities are to be studied. Many universities, colleges, polytechnics and other higher academic institutions are situated mostly in major cities. In fact, high school graduates of small cities have to migrate from their cities to these major cities in order to gain physical access to these higher institutes of learning.
However, when it comes to studying altruism and self-sufficiency, minor cities are to be studied. Denizens of small cities help each other in terms of need. The inhabitants of a small city might raise fund to help a family whose child is undergoing an expensive medical surgery. Small city inhabitants even look out for each other by gaurding each other’s properties. This quality of altruism is rarely found in big cities. Also, when it comes to self sufficiency, small cities should be studied as most women are concern with sewing and knitting of clothes and also nurturing of gardens, fathers are jack-of-all-trades as they involve in many activities, children not only focus on school work but also on farm work. Therefore, in order to understand a society’s altruism and self-sufficiency characteristics, minor cities should be studied.
True, one might say major cities are big enough to possess all the characteristics of a society. Some might even go further to cavil that major cities comprise of all the qualities every other small cities possess and so, major cities should be studied. Indeed, these are true to some extent. But consider qualities such as cooperation among people, access to fresh food, and hard work, these two qualities are mostly found in small cities. Major cities rarely possess these qualities. Besides, studying only major cities means one is being biased to small cities. Thus, both cities must be studied to understand the characteristics of a society.
In summary, both major cities and minor cities make enormous contribution to a society. It will be jaundiced to study on major cities when it comes to understand the quality of a society. Also, there are many qualities to be studied, some which are: diversity, altruism, art, self-sufficiency, and many more. Ergo, in order to understand the characteristics of a society, both major and minor cities should be studied.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'comprise' or 'consist of'?
Suggestion: comprise; consist of
...city must be studied. Minor cities only comprise of people with little to no exposure of ot...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ng a society’s art life. Furthermore, when it comes to studying accessibility ...
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Message: Did you mean 'comprise' or 'consist of'?
Suggestion: comprise; consist of
...n go further to cavil that major cities comprise of all the qualities every other small cit...
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Line 10, column 516, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'cities'' or 'city's'?
Suggestion: cities'; city's
...qualities. Besides, studying only major cities means one is being biased to small citi...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, furthermore, however, if, look, moreover, so, therefore, thus, well, in fact, in summary, speaking about, such as, talking about
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 36.0 19.5258426966 184% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 12.4196629213 113% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 14.8657303371 114% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.3162921348 88% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 33.0505617978 61% => OK
Preposition: 93.0 58.6224719101 159% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 12.9106741573 31% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 3231.0 2235.4752809 145% => OK
No of words: 605.0 442.535393258 137% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.34049586777 5.05705443957 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.95951083803 4.55969084622 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.11064279967 2.79657885939 111% => OK
Unique words: 230.0 215.323595506 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.380165289256 0.4932671777 77% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 1001.7 704.065955056 142% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.77640449438 225% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 36.0 20.2370786517 178% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 23.0359550562 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 46.9399652695 60.3974514979 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.75 118.986275619 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8055555556 23.4991977007 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.11111111111 5.21951772744 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.97078651685 141% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 7.80617977528 51% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 10.2758426966 107% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 22.0 4.83258426966 455% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.19754669197 0.243740707755 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0769561733326 0.0831039109588 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0517251234273 0.0758088955206 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.130081827201 0.150359130593 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0483749274482 0.0667264976115 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 14.1392134831 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 48.8420337079 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 12.1743820225 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.4 12.1639044944 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.41 8.38706741573 88% => OK
difficult_words: 114.0 100.480337079 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.8971910112 63% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 11.2143820225 75% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.7820224719 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum six paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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