To understand the most important characteristics of a society, one must study its major cities.
I agree that by observing the major cities of a nation, we can understand the most important characteristics of a society.
Those main cites always has huge population since they contains many job offers and desirable environment. Therefore, the observation made in those big cities are less likely to have bias due to the diversity and the total number of people observed. For example, Taipei is the capital and the largest cities in Taiwan. There are various kinds of people live here, including professors, students, and workers. Also, their hometowns are different. As a result, we can easily catch the most important and shared characteristics of the society.
Also, what we think of a society is often defined by the accomplishment of those main cities. If the capital of a nation is dirty and disgusting, we would not expect that the other cities of the nation should be clean. The reason is that a government often pays more attention in the major cities than others. Therefore, if they ignore a certain aspect in those cities, it is not probable that they surprisingly focus on that aspect in a less known city. For example, when we take a look at streets at Tokyo, a famous cities in Japan, we can see that they are clean and well-organized. However, when we observe the streets in Beijing, the capital of China, we would see that they are not as clean as Tokyo. Therefore, we would not view Chinese as disciplined as Japanese.
Someone would argue that there are also some important characteristics which can only be observed in countryside. However, since the main cities are attractive to many people across the nation, many people who are from the those minor cities would like to move to big ones. For example, many young people don't want to be limited by the resources that a minor city has. Thus, they go to the prosperous cities to find jobs with higher salaries. For example, many students from Pingtung, the southest county of Taiwan which has few chance for them, would move to Hsinchu, the city provides a lot of job offers with desirable pay, to fulfill their ambitions. As a result, those characteristics can also be observed in those main cities.
I totally agree with the statement that by studying the major cities of a society, one can easily observe the most important features of the entire population.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: contain
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Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'city'?
Suggestion: city
...ke a look at streets at Tokyo, a famous cities in Japan, we can see that they are clea...
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...ig ones. For example, many young people dont want to be limited by the resources tha...
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Message: Possible agreement error. The noun chance seems to be countable; consider using: 'few chances'.
Suggestion: few chances
...the southest county of Taiwan which has few chance for them, would move to Hsinchu, the ci...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... also be observed in those main cities. I totally agree with the statement that ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, look, so, therefore, thus, well, as to, for example, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 19.5258426966 87% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 12.4196629213 105% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 14.8657303371 47% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.3162921348 133% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 33.0505617978 115% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 58.6224719101 84% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 12.9106741573 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1943.0 2235.4752809 87% => OK
No of words: 402.0 442.535393258 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.83333333333 5.05705443957 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.47771567384 4.55969084622 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72352163745 2.79657885939 97% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 215.323595506 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.460199004975 0.4932671777 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 618.3 704.065955056 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 6.24550561798 208% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 6.0 4.99550561798 120% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 3.10617977528 225% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.2370786517 104% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 23.0359550562 82% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.7321753313 60.3974514979 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.5238095238 118.986275619 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1428571429 23.4991977007 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.95238095238 5.21951772744 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 7.80617977528 64% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 10.2758426966 88% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 5.13820224719 97% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.83258426966 145% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.210997190886 0.243740707755 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.069727429504 0.0831039109588 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0917407604109 0.0758088955206 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.182355101739 0.150359130593 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.116593016334 0.0667264976115 175% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 14.1392134831 77% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 48.8420337079 124% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 12.1743820225 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.73 12.1639044944 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.84 8.38706741573 93% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 100.480337079 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 11.8971910112 59% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 9.6 11.2143820225 86% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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