To understand the most important characteristics of a society, one must study its major cities
From Athens to our contemporary world, major cities have always been instrumental in shaping the economic, social, cultural and political status of their country. They are windows through which people can conveyed and perceived the most important characteristics of a society. While it is true that small towns and villages partly comprise a country, I believe that studying its major cities prevails if one is to understand a society
Admittedly, major cities have the largest population, and a society is made up of people and its characteristics are mainly decided by people's behaviours. Thus, to understand the most important characteristics of a society, one must study its people, the way they behave, the businesses they run all the more as most jobs aggregate in major cities since post-agrarian societies. In a context of globalisation, one could hardly misunderstand the major role metropolises have. They are peopled by myriad nationalities, drawing the backdrop of each country. This phenomenon highlight a defining feature of the contemporary societies i.e multiculturalism. Hispanics in New-York, North-Africans in Paris or Japanese's descendants in Sao Paulo also tell us about the past history of these countries.
While opponents may argue that many major cities have lost some valuable traditions that got diluted through the years of development, it would be quixotic thinking that such transformations did not reach most of the small towns. The characteristics of a society do not either only lie in the bucolic beauty of rural areas or in visible traditions, but are perceptible in people's spirits. Somehow, it might be easier to grasp these in major cities, where unlike small towns, people might be less wary of foreigners and more inclined to show themselves.
One cannot fail to consider many monuments in major cities that not only bedazzle many tourists with their beauty, but utterly capture the truly essence of their society and culture. The Santa Maria del Fiore cathedral in Florence or the mosque of Medine are both testament to this.
It is also crucial to note that in large societies that have eclectic cultures, the characteristics vary from one region to another. Many speak different languages, rely on different businesses to make a living or basically do not belong to the same ethnicity. In such cases, major cities are custodians of the preservation of heritages, and instrumental in understanding a society. Thus, if one wants to learn about a province, the most convenient and efficient way is going to its capital. Italy, United States, France, Morroco are quintessential instances that embody my arguing.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Comparison requires 'than', not 'then' nor 'as'.
Suggestion: than
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Message: Possible agreement error - use third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'highlights'.
Suggestion: highlights
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, so, then, thus, while, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 19.5258426966 82% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 12.4196629213 64% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 14.8657303371 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.3162921348 97% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 33.0505617978 103% => OK
Preposition: 58.0 58.6224719101 99% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 12.9106741573 54% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2239.0 2235.4752809 100% => OK
No of words: 422.0 442.535393258 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.30568720379 5.05705443957 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.53239876712 4.55969084622 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.1305183078 2.79657885939 112% => OK
Unique words: 238.0 215.323595506 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.563981042654 0.4932671777 114% => OK
syllable_count: 711.0 704.065955056 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 6.24550561798 112% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.99550561798 120% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.77640449438 225% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.2370786517 89% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 23.0359550562 100% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.7126293016 60.3974514979 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.388888889 118.986275619 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.4444444444 23.4991977007 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.94444444444 5.21951772744 56% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 7.80617977528 26% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 10.2758426966 78% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.83258426966 145% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.465141656559 0.243740707755 191% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.113211072754 0.0831039109588 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.123775817161 0.0758088955206 163% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.244441086945 0.150359130593 163% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.120866864696 0.0667264976115 181% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 14.1392134831 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 48.8420337079 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 12.1743820225 110% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.81 12.1639044944 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.42 8.38706741573 112% => OK
difficult_words: 124.0 100.480337079 123% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 11.8971910112 126% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 11.2143820225 100% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 11.7820224719 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 83.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 6
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