To understand the most important characteristics of a society, one must study its major cities.
In a country like India, which is widely known for its diversity, we can find variety of characteristics in society. If anyone has to study them, he or she has to go every part of the country, every state of the country, and more importantly every city as well as every village of a state.
In urban areas people genereally dont even know the names of their neighbours and sometimes not even faces. But if we go to rural area this will not be the case, most of the villages are like a giant familly altogether, helping their neighbours, will enter in their houses with considering its their own, any news spreads like a wind. This can sound exagerated but it does happen.
While the nature of people in rural areas is friendly, issues like racism, cast system, male dominant society, killing of child if it is a baby girl, not allowing girls to go out after 6-7 pm, rape is seen more in rural areas of India than in urban ones. Most people in major cities are forward thinking people.
So if anyone has to study about characteristics of a society he or she cant ignore village areas as there exists different biliefs, thoughts throughout the country.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
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Line 3, column 292, Rule ID: IT_IS[17]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: it's; it is
... enter in their houses with considering its their own, any news spreads like a wind...
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Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
... characteristics of a society he or she cant ignore village areas as there exists di...
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Message: The pronoun 'she' must be used with a third-person verb: 'cants'.
Suggestion: cants
... characteristics of a society he or she cant ignore village areas as there exists di...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, really, so, well, while, as to, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 19.5258426966 36% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 12.4196629213 32% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 14.8657303371 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 11.3162921348 9% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 33.0505617978 51% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 58.6224719101 56% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 0.0 12.9106741573 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 957.0 2235.4752809 43% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 208.0 442.535393258 47% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.60096153846 5.05705443957 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.79765784423 4.55969084622 83% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50952328154 2.79657885939 90% => OK
Unique words: 126.0 215.323595506 59% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.605769230769 0.4932671777 123% => OK
syllable_count: 306.9 704.065955056 44% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 6.24550561798 48% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.99550561798 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 20.2370786517 40% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 23.0359550562 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 70.4343666118 60.3974514979 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.625 118.986275619 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.0 23.4991977007 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.375 5.21951772744 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 7.80617977528 51% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 10.2758426966 39% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.155021762774 0.243740707755 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0688134679326 0.0831039109588 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0685385695286 0.0758088955206 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0889147475581 0.150359130593 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0359567754114 0.0667264976115 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 14.1392134831 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 48.8420337079 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 12.1743820225 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.7 12.1639044944 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.49 8.38706741573 101% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 100.480337079 47% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.8971910112 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 11.2143820225 111% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.7820224719 119% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 33.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.0 Out of 6
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