To understand the most important characteristics of a society, one must study its major cities.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
The cities of a society are like the beating hearts of a nation, continuously working in its own rhythm. Because cities are the places where the maximum number of facilities lie,
be it in employment, education or entertainment, it is not surprising that these places attract people from all parts of a country. The prompt states that the most vital properties of any society can be found by analyzing its cities. Considering that it is typically the cities where the lion's share of a nation's economical gains occur and where a wide variety of people dwell in, I mostly agree with the statement of the prompt.
The first thing that comes to mind when anyone thinks of cities is possibly how they are always abuzz with working people. The reason for this, obviously, is that cities normally accomodate the good companies, markets and other workplaces. Consequently, there are more work opportunities in a city than there would be in the rural counterparts of a society. More work leads to more money, both for the individual worker and for the society. It can thus be said that a huge proportion of a society's economical status can be understood by analyzing the different types of workplaces and earning sources that exist in its cities. This is specially true of nations which only have a handful of cities to boast about. Take for instance a country like Bangladesh. Its two main cities are responsible for 90% of the economic growth of the country, and anyone who wants to understand the very important attribute of Bangladesh's economy will inevitably have to study its cities. On the contrary, while studying the rural regions of a society may lead someone to gather information about other aspects of the society, the economy is not something that will that can be understood by such studies.
Moreover, as mentioned in a previous paragraph, the abundance of opportunities in cities attracts more people towards it. In fact, there is sufficient evidence in the social science literatures that show that major cities of a country will consist of people who represent the different cultural societies of that country. This fact is not surprising considering that cities are to people what honey is to ants. Consequentially, this means that any comprehensive study of the major cities of a society will yield information about the different existing cultures of that society - a metric that is clearly a very important one to assess the characteristics of a society.
However, there might be a few features present in a society that can only fully be understood by studying the rural areas. But the world that we live in right now has been shaped up to be such that the most important features of a society can be understood by studying its cities only, as I explain in the previous paragraphs.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...re the maximum number of facilities lie, be it in employment, education or entert...
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Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a nation' or simply 'nations'?
Suggestion: a nation; nations
...lly the cities where the lions share of a nations economical gains occur and where a wide...
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Message: Did you mean 'economic' (=connected with economy)?
Suggestion: economic
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...s I explain in the previous paragraphs.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, first, however, if, may, moreover, so, thus, well, while, for instance, in fact, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 27.0 19.5258426966 138% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 12.4196629213 105% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 14.8657303371 47% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 26.0 11.3162921348 230% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 39.0 33.0505617978 118% => OK
Preposition: 68.0 58.6224719101 116% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 12.9106741573 85% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2335.0 2235.4752809 104% => OK
No of words: 475.0 442.535393258 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.91578947368 5.05705443957 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.66845742379 4.55969084622 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84127063713 2.79657885939 102% => OK
Unique words: 228.0 215.323595506 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.48 0.4932671777 97% => OK
syllable_count: 739.8 704.065955056 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 6.24550561798 112% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.99550561798 120% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.2370786517 94% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 23.0359550562 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.2121918483 60.3974514979 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.894736842 118.986275619 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.0 23.4991977007 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.05263157895 5.21951772744 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 7.80617977528 51% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 10.2758426966 117% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.83258426966 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.208550569578 0.243740707755 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0666159971518 0.0831039109588 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0374165101985 0.0758088955206 49% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.112144882119 0.150359130593 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0273295362195 0.0667264976115 41% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 14.1392134831 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 48.8420337079 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 12.1743820225 107% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.55 12.1639044944 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.2 8.38706741573 98% => OK
difficult_words: 100.0 100.480337079 100% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 11.8971910112 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 11.2143820225 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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