To understand the most important characteristics of a society, one must study its major cities.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
It is said that “When you are in Rome, do what the Romans do”. People follow the trends of technologies and other materialistic things which are trending in the cities in the fast-paced world. These mega cities surely help to shed some light on the culture and other aspects of the society, but they are not certainly accurate reflection of the same. I mostly disagree with the statement, mentioned in the prompt and there are couple of reasons, I would like to elucidate below.
First, if we travel to any corner of the world, most of the major cities of any country, are so developed in past few decades due to advent of the technologies. There all the facilities like homes, medical assistance, food, multinational malls and restaurants, food chains are available. The globe nowadays becomes like a small town. Hence, it eventually feels that all cities are same. We hardly find trace of the original culture or trends of the city when we go to see the cities. Hence, these major cities cannot hold much more importance to showcase characteristics of the society. For instance, despite, the Capital of India, ’Delhi’ is one of the developed and densely populated cities, there is so much diversity of the people and their culture in Delhi, who live there, so original characteristics of Delhi city are somewhat disappeared now. People mostly travel to these cities like Delhi, in hope of good work-life balance, education, health facilities. And it is the same when we go to any metro city of India. Similar view goes with Mumbai, it is the ‘city of dreams’ but as it is very dense and with vast diversity of people, we cannot find original ‘Mumbaikar’ in the crowd.
Secondly, I also reckon that the rural towns are sometimes hold little more importance as far as characteristics of their original culture are considered. People from rural areas try to preserve their originality or main characteristics of the society. As we are in technology era, rural areas of the countries are also now being moved toward urbanization but for instance, I would like to provide the example of ‘Hampi’ (in State of Karnataka, India), which is included in World Site Heritage recently. This city is in rural area of the state, but it is now being famous, among and international historians and travelers, people and other tribes are trying hard to preserve their city and its culture. Though they are generating huge revenue due to tourism business, they show their cultural characteristics through their temples, folk dances and different handmade paintings, films, instruments.
Another example is Paris, though this city is famous for their arts such as, paintings, constructions like Eifel Towers, how much originality is now remained in the city? Mostly we can see recent new structures of churches, monarchs and diverse people hanging at river bay areas in Paris.
To conclude, I would concede that, mega cities from the countries show the social, economic, and political aspects, they certainly play their part to make us understand about the progress of society. But rural towns are more appropriately represent the important characteristics of the society.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, if, second, secondly, so, for instance, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 29.0 19.5258426966 149% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 12.4196629213 48% => OK
Conjunction : 22.0 14.8657303371 148% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.3162921348 88% => OK
Pronoun: 42.0 33.0505617978 127% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 75.0 58.6224719101 128% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 12.9106741573 70% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2654.0 2235.4752809 119% => OK
No of words: 525.0 442.535393258 119% => OK
Chars per words: 5.05523809524 5.05705443957 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.78673985869 4.55969084622 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87130711265 2.79657885939 103% => OK
Unique words: 265.0 215.323595506 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.504761904762 0.4932671777 102% => OK
syllable_count: 848.7 704.065955056 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 15.0 6.24550561798 240% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.77640449438 281% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.2370786517 114% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 23.0359550562 96% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.7403694395 60.3974514979 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.391304348 118.986275619 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.8260869565 23.4991977007 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.13043478261 5.21951772744 60% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 7.80617977528 64% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 10.2758426966 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.83258426966 145% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.154751661493 0.243740707755 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0449425686366 0.0831039109588 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0276505341443 0.0758088955206 36% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0840121662691 0.150359130593 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.032542998441 0.0667264976115 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 14.1392134831 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 48.8420337079 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 12.1743820225 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 12.1639044944 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.55 8.38706741573 102% => OK
difficult_words: 127.0 100.480337079 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.8971910112 88% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 11.2143820225 96% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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