Smoking is a major cause of serious illness and death throughout the world today. In the interest of the public health, governments should ban cigarettes and other tobacco products. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
In Today’s fast paced world, people are living a busy and stressful life. Hence, they find a way to vent out a tension through indulging themselves in smoking the cigarettes. Smoking is one of the important reasons of severe health problems, sometimes results in a death as well. So, government should implement action plans such as stopping cigarettes’ sales and similar tobacco products. I agree with this approach and below essay will elucidate its impacts on individuals as well as on the society.
To start with, Tobacco plays an essential role in the economies of various countries all over the world. For instance, in India, 3% of GDP is generated through tobacco business. Additionally, India is second largest country, producing a tobacco and occupying the export business market in the world.
Secondly, it is observed that there are numerous hazardous effects of tobacco on human health. For example, daily utilization of cigarettes can result into heart diseases, Asthma, Chronical Bronchitis, mouth cancer. Furthermore, in women, it can affect the reproduction system which in turn, lead to births of babies having a low weight. Also, youngsters and teenagers can be addicted to its consumption, easily turning a blind eye towards its ill effects. It is not only detrimental to the individuals but also to their members of families, affecting their mental health, in a long run.
To conclude, after a thorough comparison of good and bad effects,the drawbacks of tobacco products outweigh its benefits. So I believe, government should take strict disciplinary actions to turn down its usage among population. Authorities should regularly demonstrate its part in current economy and run campaigns to make people aware about its pernicious effects time to time.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, hence, if, second, secondly, so, well, for example, for instance, such as, as well as, to start with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1499.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 282.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.31560283688 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09790868904 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90983538965 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.695035460993 0.561755894193 124% => OK
syllable_count: 455.4 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 18.7923480106 49.4020404114 38% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 93.6875 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.625 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.75 7.06120827912 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.171029606618 0.244688304435 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0507589013688 0.084324248473 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0319017475825 0.0667982634062 48% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0948265775524 0.151304729494 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.042612664366 0.056905535591 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.28 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.86 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 78.4519038076 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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