To understand the most important characteristics of a society, one must study its major cities.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
Understanding a society would involve studying about its culture, tradition and how it has evolved over the years. Although their are some differences in the culture among the cities, the basic principles are common to all of them. Therefore, I mostly disagree with the given statement mainly for two reasons. However, to understand the current trends and to get an insight about how a culture would turn out to be in the future it would be important to study about its major cities.
Firstly, people who are a from a specific society would more or less possess the same kind of culture. Irrespective of the place a person lives in, it could be either a small town or a major city, everyone are taught about their culture right from their childhood. They study about their culture in schools through their regional literature books, which primarily would deal with the culture and tradition of that community. Children are also taught about their culture by their parents and try to enforce the traditions over their children. Therefore, the basic ideology about their culture gets inculcated in their minds. Hence, when the child grows these ideologies might get altered but the most important characteristics remain unchanged. Therefore, in order to understand about a society studying the natives would give a better understanding irrespective of the place they live in.
Secondly, most people who live in major cities are people who have migrated form small towns. Therefore, the carry along their culture along with them wherever they go. In fact, most of the traditions that are followed by a society originated in places which are no longer present in maps of the place. A once major city might not exist today. But, the culture originated from that city would still exist. Therefore, to get a comprehensive understanding about a culture it is mandatory that a person studies about the all kinds of places in that society
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, hence, however, if, second, secondly, so, still, therefore, kind of, more or less
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 19.5258426966 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 12.4196629213 81% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 14.8657303371 47% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.3162921348 97% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 33.0505617978 88% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 58.6224719101 89% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 12.9106741573 23% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1613.0 2235.4752809 72% => OK
No of words: 322.0 442.535393258 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.00931677019 5.05705443957 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23607819155 4.55969084622 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64041825706 2.79657885939 94% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 215.323595506 75% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.5 0.4932671777 101% => OK
syllable_count: 511.2 704.065955056 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 6.24550561798 48% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.99550561798 100% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.2370786517 84% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 23.0359550562 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.8000300887 60.3974514979 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.8823529412 118.986275619 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.9411764706 23.4991977007 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.35294117647 5.21951772744 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.97078651685 60% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 7.80617977528 51% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 10.2758426966 39% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 4.83258426966 228% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.138539857695 0.243740707755 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0556744195381 0.0831039109588 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0410998620731 0.0758088955206 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.114266250552 0.150359130593 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0297977285492 0.0667264976115 45% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 14.1392134831 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 48.8420337079 109% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 12.1743820225 85% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 12.1639044944 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.62 8.38706741573 91% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 100.480337079 63% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.8971910112 88% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 11.2143820225 82% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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