To understand the most important characterstics of society, study its city.
There has been many debates on importance of city in understanding culture of any country or state. Here, prompt asserts that studying urban area of any state is the best way to understand unique characterstics and culture of the soceity of that nation. However, I mostly disagree with this statement and claim my thesis is persuasive by two main premises.
Most of the city area are similar in appearance and experiences. It is manly because people tend to migrate from less developed rustic part of world to more affluent, highly prospective and urban part of world, which not only result in amalgam of eclectic cultures in urban areas, but also coerce city authority to expand the area to accomodate the immigrant, thereby destroying in cultural heritages. For instance, in city area of India, the unique characterstics of conventional Indian culture: cultural dress of India, uniquely Indian dance called Vratyanityam, are overshadowed by modern society, representing queit different and intermingled culture, which is actually similar in most of the big cities around the world. So, If we are totally blindfolded and placed in two different cities, and then allowed to open our we don't really know the difference because of sundry of multicultural people.
In fact, villages and small towns actually show characterstic of society of any state. It is because of reason that there is no effect of migration like it happens in bigger cities due to the fact that they are less developed than urban cities. For example, if you want to know about Indian society, you must visit village area where conventional and traditional practises still prevails. Cultural dance, monuments, arts, language, songs, etc are not only preserved in small villlages and town in India but also, the practise is still going on till date. So, small towns and villages render the society of state more than any other grand cities, due to unsullied nature of rustic culture and tradition.
However, in some cases, urban area focuses more on the culture and tradition of place, only in those cities, where cultural heritages and monuments are preserved by state. For instance, in Kathmandu city, there are 5 World heritage sites which are protected by not only UN but also by state. There are palaces, arts, idols, monuments, scripts, architectures and many traditional items which directly reflect on overall tradition of Nepalese society. By protecting cultural sites, the city is able to be uniquely different than other one and thereby, be epitome of characterstic of the particular society.
In conclusion, most of the city, because they are similar due to multi-cultural diversity, becomes less prominent area in order to get clear picture of overall characterstics of any nation or culture.In other hand, if the cultural heritages are protected by city administration, in this case, it becomes important venue to study overall culture of society. So the topic is quiet contingent on various factor for choosing which side holds more water and which side holds less.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, however, if, really, so, still, then, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in fact, in some cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 19.5258426966 118% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 12.4196629213 8% => OK
Conjunction : 22.0 14.8657303371 148% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.3162921348 106% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 33.0505617978 61% => OK
Preposition: 79.0 58.6224719101 135% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 12.9106741573 85% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2559.0 2235.4752809 114% => OK
No of words: 495.0 442.535393258 112% => OK
Chars per words: 5.1696969697 5.05705443957 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.71684168287 4.55969084622 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82947593882 2.79657885939 101% => OK
Unique words: 246.0 215.323595506 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.49696969697 0.4932671777 101% => OK
syllable_count: 839.7 704.065955056 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.38483146067 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.2370786517 89% => OK
Sentence length: 27.0 23.0359550562 117% => OK
Sentence length SD: 82.2076000512 60.3974514979 136% => OK
Chars per sentence: 142.166666667 118.986275619 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.5 23.4991977007 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.83333333333 5.21951772744 131% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 7.80617977528 77% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 10.2758426966 68% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.83258426966 186% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.166435661952 0.243740707755 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0550138649328 0.0831039109588 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0579063248745 0.0758088955206 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.107839259977 0.150359130593 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0607309841712 0.0667264976115 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.7 14.1392134831 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.61 48.8420337079 73% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 12.1743820225 123% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 12.1639044944 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.93 8.38706741573 106% => OK
difficult_words: 124.0 100.480337079 123% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.8971910112 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 11.2143820225 114% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.7820224719 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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