Unfortunately, in contemporary society, creating an appealing image has become more important than the reality or truth behind that image.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
Character of a person is judge by the image he/she has created it the society. It is stated in the prompt that in society, creating an appealing image has become important than the reality or the truth behind the image. In my not so humble opinion, I mostly agree with the statement that creating image in more important than the reality.
To begin with, now a day’s most of the people are busy making fake image in the society so that society will accept them. If due to certain reasons if a person don’t have good image in the society then society benight him/her and consider him/her as a big debacle. For instance one can exemplify, if a person is involved in some sort of crime or if the person is reputation is hamper due to his one mistake then society will give him a tag as a debacle. They will not see the reason behind his action instead of that society will create various false rumors to attenuate his image. Due to this reason no matter how person is from inside he/she always tries to maintain appealing image.
Moreover, due to old thinking of society, they don’t see every job as pleasant one. Most of the time society judge person on his job title. Society thinks that person who is involved in a job which has less pay is not apt and to such person society consider as debacle. But, society doesn’t understand that the person’s character is dubious on his job title. They categories people according to their job so person who is having good job good pay have positive image in the society whereas person who don’t have good job or good pay have negative image and such person is isolated from society. For exemplar, person who is doing office job have positive image in the society no matter how he is from inside whereas person who pick up the garbage have negative image in society and most of the time these people are benighted.
Finally, society also ignores or isolates people who think differently than everyone else. If person’s thinking is modern or straightforward than such people are benighted because even though these people are right but it creates negative image in the society and society jumps to the conclusion that this person in debacle. For instance, in sixteenth century people used to believe that earth is flat and it is centre of the universe and all other planets revolve around it when great scientist Galileo Galilee placated that earth is round and sun is the centre of the solar system society ignored him considered him as a debacle and kept him is house arrest. Society was not ready to accept the truth and consider him as a mad person. Due to such events in history most of the people maintain fake image in the public.
In conclusion, by considering all the point discussed above it is true that unfortunately, in contemporary society, creating an appealing image has become more important than the reality or truth behind the image.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, if, moreover, so, then, whereas, for instance, in conclusion, sort of, it is true, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 25.0 19.5258426966 128% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 12.4196629213 40% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 14.8657303371 114% => OK
Relative clauses : 18.0 11.3162921348 159% => OK
Pronoun: 46.0 33.0505617978 139% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 60.0 58.6224719101 102% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 12.9106741573 31% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2405.0 2235.4752809 108% => OK
No of words: 513.0 442.535393258 116% => OK
Chars per words: 4.68810916179 5.05705443957 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.75914943092 4.55969084622 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.39730103958 2.79657885939 86% => OK
Unique words: 210.0 215.323595506 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.409356725146 0.4932671777 83% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 787.5 704.065955056 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.99550561798 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.38483146067 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.2370786517 99% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 23.0359550562 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 71.0193459559 60.3974514979 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.25 118.986275619 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.65 23.4991977007 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.8 5.21951772744 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 7.80617977528 26% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 10.2758426966 88% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 5.13820224719 195% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.224971902971 0.243740707755 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.094278102239 0.0831039109588 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0979086858502 0.0758088955206 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.196523051015 0.150359130593 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.128620971649 0.0667264976115 193% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 14.1392134831 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 48.8420337079 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 12.1743820225 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.22 12.1639044944 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.25 8.38706741573 86% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 100.480337079 77% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.8971910112 76% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 11.2143820225 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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