"As we acquire more knowledge, things do not become more comprehensible, but more
complex and more mysterious."
The author states that as we tend to access more information on something,it tends to become more complex and evasive,thereby making it less comprehensive to us. To determine whether author's point of view is correct could be done in different aspects. Different people may have different opiions due to their respective way of thinking. Some may argue that too much knowledge required to understand some concepts makes them incomprehensible for commons while others may say that in reality ,things are not simple and more complex analysis of then is required which cannot be done without acquiring more knowledge. On balance,my view is that we need to continuously increase our knowledge which enable to make rigorous concepts more comprehesible and also healps in understanding or inventing new things.
Firstly,it is commonly accepted norm that without knowledge,we have no power to understand. It is our entrenched human quality to explore and acquire knowledge that has led us to this modern life with so many incredible inventions like telephones,computers etc. As example,with the advnt of computers, many simulations are now possible like space explorations,structual designings,chemical phenomenons etc which were incomprehensible for older generations. Additionally,one can totally agree that for getting a simple and clear view of any concept, one need to understand its complex analysis and evaluation. A great example is Einstein famous equation "E=mc2" which has been heard at least once in everyone life.But,to reach this simplistic formula of nature,Einstein has to do rigourous research for more knowledge and complex calculations. This shows that we always need to increase our knowledge to make things simple and clear.
Secondly,I would like to disagree with author's statement by asserting that having more knowledge helps us understand the other hidden aspects of any concept. Without further research,we would not be able to find new ways of things,new applications of existing technologies etc. It not only,increases their scope but also make them robust,diverse. One great example to look at is Machine learning.With more people doing research on it,it has now expanded to may fields of science namely Biology,Astronomy,Computational sciences etc. People can understand its concepts easily and from different viewpoints,in short more comprehesibly. I would like state increasing knowledge on any concept nto only makes it more comprehesible,but also opens new doors for innovation.
Although one can state that too much knowledge may deviate any person in understanding a concept,which I totally agreew with. However,this can be totally resolved by making a clear pathway for understanding things.One can consult seniors or relevant persons for clarificationa and guidance.One should not stop learning just because of fear of making it incomprehesible.
In the end ,I would like to state that we should always strive for more knowledge as this enables us to properly understand complex things, thereby maing them more comprehensible. It also provides new view points,innovations and produces new ivetions to make our life easier and simpler.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, look, may, second, secondly, so, then, while, as to, at least, in short
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 19.5258426966 77% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 21.0 12.4196629213 169% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 14.8657303371 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 11.3162921348 141% => OK
Pronoun: 52.0 33.0505617978 157% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 64.0 58.6224719101 109% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 12.9106741573 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2721.0 2235.4752809 122% => OK
No of words: 480.0 442.535393258 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.66875 5.05705443957 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.68069463864 4.55969084622 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.70264017572 2.79657885939 132% => OK
Unique words: 257.0 215.323595506 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.535416666667 0.4932671777 109% => OK
syllable_count: 834.3 704.065955056 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 6.24550561798 224% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.38483146067 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.2370786517 104% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 23.0359550562 96% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.6619045618 60.3974514979 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.571428571 118.986275619 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.8571428571 23.4991977007 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.28571428571 5.21951772744 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 31.0 7.80617977528 397% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 10.2758426966 156% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.83258426966 83% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.190883842123 0.243740707755 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0615572557412 0.0831039109588 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0707569466835 0.0758088955206 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.119874700089 0.150359130593 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.076211250883 0.0667264976115 114% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.7 14.1392134831 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 48.8420337079 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 12.1743820225 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.9 12.1639044944 131% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.94 8.38706741573 107% => OK
difficult_words: 128.0 100.480337079 127% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 11.8971910112 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 11.2143820225 96% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.