As we acquire more knowledge, things do not become more comprehensible, but more complex and mysterious.
Knowledge is defined as whatever that we can sink into our minds and percept it and understanding its fundamentals will give rise to the sea which consists information instead of water of distinct rivers. The concept of more knowledge can be understood in such a manner that when we are a child everything is so simple and easy for us. The only things that we need are food, nap and love. But when we grow up then our responsibilites are changed completely. It is like acquiring more knowledge of the same world in which we have lived since the birth. Now things like taxes, debt, budget, insurances become basic for us. Hence, it is true that as we acquire more knowledge, things do not become more comprehensible, but more complex and mysterious.
Initially, any life of the scientist can exemplify this statement. As in the begining studying more and having greater knowledge from others can be amusing for sometime but after a period the complexity of research in the field barges into the life of scientists. The world would be narrowed down to them but it consists mysteries of intrications of their study. This is the time when the discoveries comes into existence and experiments are performed that can lead to the better tomorrow.
In addition, the discovery of atom bomb that has been done by the Sir Albert Einstien was created by his keen interest in nuclear fission and fusion but hardly he knew
that his discovery could be used by the government to sabotage the Hiroshima and Nagasaki. He had highly been remorseful for such wrongdoings of his discovery. Sir Nikola Tesla had also destroyed his inventions because he knew that his discoveries can be used by the goverment for hurting other innocent people. This is one of the best example for the support of the argument.
Although by gaining more knowldge the tasks and complications increases but it also gives relieve to the person that they were able to reach to the heights of such determination in which only handful of people have been able to achieve it. It also gives the confidence and the sense of responsibility that can be handled by the person.
This gves to the conclusion that yet it will be more mysterious but sometimes in the end it can become comprehensible too.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, so, then, in addition, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 19.5258426966 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 12.4196629213 105% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 14.8657303371 128% => OK
Relative clauses : 17.0 11.3162921348 150% => OK
Pronoun: 46.0 33.0505617978 139% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 49.0 58.6224719101 84% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 12.9106741573 70% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1871.0 2235.4752809 84% => OK
No of words: 390.0 442.535393258 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.79743589744 5.05705443957 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44391917772 4.55969084622 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78681619598 2.79657885939 100% => OK
Unique words: 206.0 215.323595506 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.528205128205 0.4932671777 107% => OK
syllable_count: 591.3 704.065955056 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 6.24550561798 128% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.38483146067 23% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.2370786517 89% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 23.0359550562 91% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.3983401473 60.3974514979 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.944444444 118.986275619 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6666666667 23.4991977007 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.05555555556 5.21951772744 59% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 7.80617977528 26% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 10.2758426966 88% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.83258426966 124% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.337487543616 0.243740707755 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.106076281689 0.0831039109588 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.158967647246 0.0758088955206 210% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.147188737821 0.150359130593 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.164067477202 0.0667264976115 246% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 14.1392134831 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 48.8420337079 120% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 12.1743820225 85% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.56 12.1639044944 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.52 8.38706741573 102% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 100.480337079 95% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.8971910112 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 11.2143820225 93% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 79.17 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.75 Out of 6
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