As we acquire more knowledge, things do not become more comprehensible, but more complex and mysterious.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
Everybody in today’s world knows that ‘Knowledge is Power’. The basic purpose of human life is to gain knowledge throughout the life through experiences, educations and different means. The prompt suggest that as we acquire knowledge things does not become simples, instead becomes more convoluted. I believe that sometimes knowledge opens the door of our minds and sometimes it becomes too complicated to acquire.
Firstly, people gain more and more knowledge throughout their childhood. The things that earlier felt difficult to understand to a child becomes much more clear in mind as we gain education. For instance, during the initial phase of life ie during childhood a child will feel many things are new and different, but as and when a child gains the knowledge of things through school and surroundings, it becomes easier to comprehend different things. A child would gain knowledge of things maths, history, languages etc and eventually things will become easier for the child. Thus, during the early stages ofl life by gaining knowledge, things becomes easier and lucid like water.
Secondly, as the society advances into sciences, we gain new knowledge every single day. This makes things easier to understand which were in the absence ok knowledge were difficult to comprehend. For instance, earlier flying in the air was a dream for people. But, when the Wright Brother invented the first aeroplane, the dream became a reality. People became of aeronautical dynamics and how a aeroplane works. Nowadays, thousand of flights flies across the globe caring millions of people. Knowledge of new and new things in life makes difficult concepts like flying also easier.
However, there are some cases where as and when we gain more knowledge into the field it more more complicated. For instance, Study of universe is one such field.
More knowledge is being acquired of the field more and more it becomes tougher to understand. Many concepts, like Quantum Theory, Time travel, as we go deeper into the subjects things become more convoluted. Today, the quantum theory is unable to relate with Einstein’s principles and to understand how does things operates in quantum world in becoming difficult to comprehend.
All in all, knowledge unlocks the doors of mind which earlier were closed but, there are fields the deeper we dig the to find the deeper meaning of things, they become even more complex than the reality of our world. Overall in life knowledge frees us but sometimes it makes our understanding complicated.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 396, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...became of aeronautical dynamics and how a aeroplane works. Nowadays, thousand of ...
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Line 5, column 425, Rule ID: NODT_DOZEN[1]
Message: Use simply: 'a thousand'.
Suggestion: a thousand
...cs and how a aeroplane works. Nowadays, thousand of flights flies across the globe carin...
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Line 7, column 31, Rule ID: WHERE_AS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'whereas'?
Suggestion: whereas
...asier. However, there are some cases where as and when we gain more knowledge into th...
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Line 7, column 90, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: more
...e gain more knowledge into the field it more more complicated. For instance, Study of uni...
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Line 7, column 90, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'more' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: more
...e gain more knowledge into the field it more more complicated. For instance, Study of uni...
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Line 8, column 316, Rule ID: DOES_X_HAS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'operate'? As 'do' is already inflected, the verb cannot also be inflected.
Suggestion: operate
...iples and to understand how does things operates in quantum world in becoming difficult ...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...n quantum world in becoming difficult to comprehend. All in all, knowledge un...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, thus, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 19.5258426966 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 12.4196629213 24% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 14.8657303371 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.3162921348 88% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 33.0505617978 70% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 58.6224719101 87% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 12.9106741573 39% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2141.0 2235.4752809 96% => OK
No of words: 411.0 442.535393258 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.20924574209 5.05705443957 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.50256981431 4.55969084622 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66060813889 2.79657885939 95% => OK
Unique words: 199.0 215.323595506 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.484184914842 0.4932671777 98% => OK
syllable_count: 642.6 704.065955056 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.99550561798 120% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.2370786517 114% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 23.0359550562 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 47.3059462646 60.3974514979 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.0869565217 118.986275619 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8695652174 23.4991977007 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.47826086957 5.21951772744 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 7.80617977528 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 10.2758426966 165% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.83258426966 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.263506653923 0.243740707755 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0869012459407 0.0831039109588 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0820896479552 0.0758088955206 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.159161998545 0.150359130593 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0492274760989 0.0667264976115 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 14.1392134831 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 48.8420337079 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 12.1743820225 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.64 12.1639044944 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.94 8.38706741573 95% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 100.480337079 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 11.8971910112 59% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.8 11.2143820225 78% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.7820224719 85% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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