As we acquire more knowledge, things do not become more comprehensible, but more complex and mysterious.
People generally say that when you have good knowledge you can comprehend everything better. A person with full knowledge will definitely understand everything in an easy way. But learning more will develop new queries and doubts which will make his knowledge more complex. A person will try to learn more about the theories that have been linked and discovered. It is still debatable whether knowledge helps to comprehend things easily or knowledge will let people think more about complex problems existing in society.
Firstly, a person with good knowledge will be able to understand things better. They can dig deeper into a subject and find more new theories related to that. For example, let us think about gravity. It came from a small concept of an apple falling on Newton’s head. He was a knowledgeable person, but the apple had made him realise that there is something more complex that he has to learn about. The theory of physics is easy to understand if a person has good knowledge, but many theories are developed because of the queries raised due to complex problems that exist in society.
Secondly, as one comprehends things, they will feel enthusiastic to learn more about the subject. For example, the Big bang theory was initially a theory, later due to this enthusiasm raised in many people to understand and discover complex problems, different phases of the earth taking shape from a hot ball into a place which we are living today is discovered. These theories will never have an ending and as people start to study more, understand things more, and many such theories are born.
Although people may argue for understanding things better if they have enough knowledge and complexities only arise due to insufficient knowledge. For 200 years there have been many discoveries that have been discovered with good knowledge. The aeroplane by Wright brother, The electric bulb by Edison are examples that support the statement that says with proper knowledge things are more comprehensible but aeroplanes and electric bulbs have been a base to invent more things and solve complex and mysterious problems.
There are many cases in which knowledge is easier to understand on every problem. People still think that knowledge is the only way to easily comprehend things. How if knowledge is the only way how the discovery of photosynthesis was discovered?
Everyone understands that trees give us shade, fruits, wood etc. but the complexity and mystery of how trees live made people discover photosynthesis problems. Furthermore, it leads to the identification that trees need sunlight to make their own food using chlorophyll pigment.
In conclusion, it is necessary for knowledge to comprehend things but knowledge is used to discover many complex and mysterious things that have been left unnoticed or undiscovered to date. Knowledge may make things to be understood easily, and help to discover more such theories that in turn become knowledge for future generations.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 161, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in an easy way" with adverb for "easy"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...e will definitely understand everything in an easy way. But learning more will develop new que...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, may, second, secondly, so, still, thus, as to, for example, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 25.0 19.5258426966 128% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 12.4196629213 105% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 14.8657303371 141% => OK
Relative clauses : 18.0 11.3162921348 159% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 33.0505617978 100% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 58.6224719101 89% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 12.9106741573 23% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2521.0 2235.4752809 113% => OK
No of words: 487.0 442.535393258 110% => OK
Chars per words: 5.17659137577 5.05705443957 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.69766713281 4.55969084622 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77644343434 2.79657885939 99% => OK
Unique words: 225.0 215.323595506 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.462012320329 0.4932671777 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 772.2 704.065955056 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 6.24550561798 128% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.99550561798 140% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 6.0 1.77640449438 338% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 4.38483146067 23% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 20.2370786517 124% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 23.0359550562 82% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 57.9467893847 60.3974514979 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.84 118.986275619 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.48 23.4991977007 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.44 5.21951772744 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.97078651685 141% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 7.80617977528 13% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 10.2758426966 107% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 5.13820224719 97% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.83258426966 186% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.345251627505 0.243740707755 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.102864089173 0.0831039109588 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.097149934868 0.0758088955206 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.181872375195 0.150359130593 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0918426128368 0.0667264976115 138% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 14.1392134831 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 48.8420337079 107% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 12.1743820225 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.76 12.1639044944 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.5 8.38706741573 89% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 100.480337079 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 11.8971910112 59% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 9.6 11.2143820225 86% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.7820224719 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum six paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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